Ode to the Beach
My reflections at the shore5 total reviews
Comment from Pangalactic
Absolutely beautiful.
Nice to read a piece so full of positivity, and honour towards nature. Loved the beachside visuals; the soaring gulls. Isn't nature the ultimate artist :)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Absolutely beautiful.
Nice to read a piece so full of positivity, and honour towards nature. Loved the beachside visuals; the soaring gulls. Isn't nature the ultimate artist :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you! Yes it IS!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great rhyming and flows freely. Your poem is very well written, describing the beauty of the seashore, and how viewing its many attributes, makes you want to worship and praise the Creator. He has given us so many things to enjoy and make life worth living.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Great rhyming and flows freely. Your poem is very well written, describing the beauty of the seashore, and how viewing its many attributes, makes you want to worship and praise the Creator. He has given us so many things to enjoy and make life worth living.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Anne!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Hawk37
Wow-what a beautiful scene you're making me want to go to the beach myself and enjoy the sights and take it all in. The sound of the seagulls the waves crashing, the smell of the saltwater in the air with the cool breeze on your skin. Miss it
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Wow-what a beautiful scene you're making me want to go to the beach myself and enjoy the sights and take it all in. The sound of the seagulls the waves crashing, the smell of the saltwater in the air with the cool breeze on your skin. Miss it
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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So glad it took you there! Thank you
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Praise be when the world's afire with the light of the Son as well as he gaseous circle that warms our toes and thumbs. Penetrate the world with words of praise... always
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Praise be when the world's afire with the light of the Son as well as he gaseous circle that warms our toes and thumbs. Penetrate the world with words of praise... always
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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God bless you
Comment from RGstar
I might have segregated into stanzas here Jewel, just so could savour the sentiments before the next because valuable meaning might get lost in this well worked piece.
Hope time finds you well.
Have a pleasant Sunday.
My best.
RG
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I might have segregated into stanzas here Jewel, just so could savour the sentiments before the next because valuable meaning might get lost in this well worked piece.
Hope time finds you well.
Have a pleasant Sunday.
My best.
RG
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I thought I had separated it. Was having issues with the editor.
