Copper Tresses
Hometown haiku for the club challenge8 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
Lovely artwork for your clever haiku, June. Trees with wavy auburn hair are maples I suppose. I know tourists flock for this autumn viewing so the satori is apt.
Well done!
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
Lovely artwork for your clever haiku, June. Trees with wavy auburn hair are maples I suppose. I know tourists flock for this autumn viewing so the satori is apt.
Well done!
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Yes, tourists will take planes, trains and automobiles to come view the fall foliage in New England. It's really quite colorful - one of the reasons I enjoy living in Massachusetts. Thanks for dropping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Hi June!
A terrific presentation for this club entry. Very vivid wording describes that photo op image. Copper tresses is a great descriptor for those fall New England leaves.
Mark
P.S. IMHO ... if you increase your font size for your text, your overall presentation will be enhanced with other FS reviewers.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
Hi June!
A terrific presentation for this club entry. Very vivid wording describes that photo op image. Copper tresses is a great descriptor for those fall New England leaves.
Mark
P.S. IMHO ... if you increase your font size for your text, your overall presentation will be enhanced with other FS reviewers.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Yes, tourists will take planes, trains and automobiles to come view the fall foliage in New England. It's really quite colorful - one of the reasons I enjoy living in Massachusetts. Thanks for dropping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You bring an autumnal scene here with all the copper colours of leaves falling and your write has a magical spark about your home town June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
You bring an autumnal scene here with all the copper colours of leaves falling and your write has a magical spark about your home town June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I'm happy you enjoyed reding this haiku about the New England foliage in the fall. Tourists will take planes, trains and automobiles to see these colorful leaves. One of the things I love about living here. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Copper Tresses"
These are the beauty of the leaves on the trees in the form of a Haiku Club Challenge.
Short and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
"Copper Tresses"
These are the beauty of the leaves on the trees in the form of a Haiku Club Challenge.
Short and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I'm happy you enjoyed reding this haiku about the New England foliage in the fall. Tourists will take planes, trains and automobiles to see these colorful leaves. One of the things I love about living here. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I have to say that this is a beautiful photo op that captured its texture and fringed edge. What a great photo and nice poem for the photo.
Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
I have to say that this is a beautiful photo op that captured its texture and fringed edge. What a great photo and nice poem for the photo.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I'm happy you enjoyed reding this haiku about the New England foliage in the fall. Tourists will take planes, trains and automobiles to see these colorful leaves. One of the things I love about living here. Thank you for sharing your sentiments. And generous rating!
Comment from royowen
We've been to New England in the autumn, and it's a marvellous sight, the weather is stable and it's such a picturesque corner of the world, great haiku, bless you, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
We've been to New England in the autumn, and it's a marvellous sight, the weather is stable and it's such a picturesque corner of the world, great haiku, bless you, Roy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I'm happy you enjoyed reding this haiku about the New England foliage in the fall. Tourists will take planes, trains and automobiles to see these colorful leaves. One of the things I love about living here. Thank you for sharing your sentiments. And generous rating!
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Most welcome
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Your picture goes brilliantly with your poem. You poem is incredibly detailed for such few words. Great work. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
Your picture goes brilliantly with your poem. You poem is incredibly detailed for such few words. Great work. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I'm happy you enjoyed reding this haiku about the New England foliage in the fall. Tourists will take planes, trains and automobiles to see these colorful leaves. One of the things I love about living here. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
very beautiful art work, the haiku was brilliant
I might just scroll and read some more of your
work they certainly went together like wow that's
what i have to say
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
very beautiful art work, the haiku was brilliant
I might just scroll and read some more of your
work they certainly went together like wow that's
what i have to say
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I'm happy you enjoyed reding this haiku about the New England foliage in the fall. Tourists will take planes, trains and automobiles to see these colorful leaves. One of the things I love about living here. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.