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Alicia Wins The Nobel Prize

Recognizing an incredible writer.

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Comment from John Ciarmello
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This is quite a huge task that you have so cleverly put together with these few words. I feel the shorter the piece the harder the write and the more talent the writer must possess. Nice work here

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2022


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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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There's some good alliteration. Unless the reader reads this aloud, they might miss it. The repetition of w's might indicate a whooping, cheering Alicia on, for winning the Nobel Literature Prize.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2022


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    Thank you!
reply by Liz O'Neill on 14-Feb-2022
    ***smile***
Comment from nomi338
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God gives to everyone something. If his gift to you are words, you must either speak them or write them down. You must by no means, hide them or keep them to yourself. Someone's life may depend upon learning what God has given you to say.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022


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Comment from prettybluebirds
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This is a beautiful tribute to a great lady. Someone needs to fight for the rights of these great authors. This is short and nicely done writing. I see it is a contest entry so I wish you tons of luck.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


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Comment from Janetsue
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I cannot even imagine how exciting something like that would be to experience. You have expressed a lot of good emotion with this word prompt posting. I enjoyed reading it very much.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


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Comment from Rebel Jim
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I like your piece... The subject matter is awesome, as far as I'm concerned.
I looked her up at Wikipedia... Impressive lady.
Don't see any faults with your piece...
My compliments... Good Luck with the contest...
"Keep on Writin'!" ( would've given you a six, but I guess I already
used up my allotment for this month)...

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


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reply by Rebel Jim on 12-Feb-2022
    You're very welcome!
Comment from juliaSjames
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This is an excellent response to the prompt. God given talent plus dedication can often take people to unprecedented heights of achievement.

Suggest you write " Nobel
Literature Prize."

Final line suggest you write

"Her reward today means the world."

Count is still 21 words.

Good luck in the contest.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you for your help! It sounds better. Thank you, my friend!
reply by juliaSjames on 12-Feb-2022
    You're welcome.

    Best of luck

Comment from Janet Foor
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Thank you for recognizing an incredible writer with your 21 word spiritual fiction poem. I think you have accomplished the task and met the requirements of this writing prompt.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


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Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Perfect entry for the 21 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt with best wishes in the contest my friend! The storyline is interesting and held my attention and imagery is spot on;-)

Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


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Comment from justafan
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This form is not something I am familiar with, Raul but I think you did a good job with it.
Just think one day, maybe someone will be doing a writing prompt about an author and your name will be the one they choose. :)
BRAVO

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


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    Thank you!