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Quiet Lawyer

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Can a broken heart be mended?

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Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Wow I enjoyed reading this well written piece! Excellent story indeed my friend;-) The characters are exemplary and the storyline was captivating and held my attention throughout the piece!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you;-)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 16-Feb-2022
    ;-)
Comment from Begin Again
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Your mom's internet may be a lot like mine, but it was the only one available when I moved here. I believe I've heard that U.S. Cellular has one in this location and my phone works perfectly so I might check with them.

Now, as for the story, I believe this is my favorite one. I know the football one is warm between Katherine and Gabriel and I enjoy the story line, but this one just seems to have something special woven between the lines. I can't explain it, but I love it. Maybe it is all the animals (especially the dogs) and don't forget the horses-a$$. LOl Nice job, Barbara.

Enjoy your visit with your family.

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you for the encouragement. All my reviewers seem to have a favorite story.
Comment from Ricky1024
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This Chapter Number Five was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
I also notice as I was reviewing this. I could not find any problems with the grammar North Flo.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Barbara, it was good to see that you were able to post after all. Things are really moving along, and I can't wait to see how it will all pan out. Still away to go before we'll?find out. I love the story. Ulla:)))

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Oh, oh, this story is shaping up to become very interesting - rivalry for the girl. I was surprised to see your story today, but am glad you were able to get internet at your mother's. Enjoy your visit.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Anne Johnston on 12-Feb-2022
    You are welcome, Barbara