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Regret

Writing group prompt: Regret; Mystic archetype; use motif

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Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
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THE heros'jurney inshort form moves you story along well. He man who must prove himself (with ifts he may be misusing but still...) and can then return to claim his place and mate is nicely rounded by his passing on of the torch to his young helper.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you, Nancy!
reply by NANCY V. FORREST on 12-Feb-2022
    :-)
Comment from Sally Law
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Miracle workers probably started out authentic and then when the crowds form and it somehow evolved into a show. Money was to be had, and they slipped down the proverbial slope. I know a few here, and one very closely. He had an affair with his secretary and it just about ruined him. Unfortunately, there are so many that fit this description and discredit the gospel of Christ.

A painful account of a true story, I think.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Thank you, Sally!
    Hope all's well with you.
    Kisses and hugs back at you.
    Chris