God On Dale
God made an angel in heaven30 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Alcreator a marvelous Monday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 21 word Spiritual fiction entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello Alcreator a marvelous Monday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 21 word Spiritual fiction entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from jaded831
I enjoyed this piece. Your piece captures the truth about life. Here today and gone tomorrow, what matters is what you accomplish during your life. We all should be contributing to mankind, even if it just by living a good life.
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I enjoyed this piece. Your piece captures the truth about life. Here today and gone tomorrow, what matters is what you accomplish during your life. We all should be contributing to mankind, even if it just by living a good life.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Wow, this was quite a challenge of what words to use and what not to use. If one reads this aloud, they will be treated to the joy of alliteration. I bet many readers would prefer to go in their sleep.
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Wow, this was quite a challenge of what words to use and what not to use. If one reads this aloud, they will be treated to the joy of alliteration. I bet many readers would prefer to go in their sleep.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 21 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well as far as I can tell.
Who's Dale Ray? I like the positive ending.
Well done, good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the 21 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well as far as I can tell.
Who's Dale Ray? I like the positive ending.
Well done, good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
I read this in the contest entries earlier today. I thought it was good then and still do. I love the artwork you attached to the writing, it adds a lot to the meaning of the story. good luck
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I read this in the contest entries earlier today. I thought it was good then and still do. I love the artwork you attached to the writing, it adds a lot to the meaning of the story. good luck
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
Comment from Earl Corp
Kudos for making a complete story in just 21 words. It's hard to get a beginning, middle and end that makes sense with that few words to work with. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
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Kudos for making a complete story in just 21 words. It's hard to get a beginning, middle and end that makes sense with that few words to work with. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
Comment from write hand blue
Hi there, a most interesting idea for a short contest entry. The forbidden words make it challenging for anyone who enters it. I wish you the best of luck and thank you for sharing...
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Hi there, a most interesting idea for a short contest entry. The forbidden words make it challenging for anyone who enters it. I wish you the best of luck and thank you for sharing...
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
Comment from Cristine22
What an interesting challenge. Well done in completing it. It's no easy task to write a story with so few words, but you've done very well with it. It makes me think about the value of different things, like winning a Nobel prize vs becoming an angel. Great job!
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What an interesting challenge. Well done in completing it. It's no easy task to write a story with so few words, but you've done very well with it. It makes me think about the value of different things, like winning a Nobel prize vs becoming an angel. Great job!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from forestport12
Even the way you presented this with such a degree of professionalism. This was simple, uncomplicated, yet resonated, and I will be thinking about what you meant and the depth of a spiritual dive you put into this. Amen.
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Even the way you presented this with such a degree of professionalism. This was simple, uncomplicated, yet resonated, and I will be thinking about what you meant and the depth of a spiritual dive you put into this. Amen.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from Riya B.
The way you used the given words for this poem was just wonderful, and I think you did an amazing job. It is a short but very meaningful poem! I would like to see more of your work :)
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The way you used the given words for this poem was just wonderful, and I think you did an amazing job. It is a short but very meaningful poem! I would like to see more of your work :)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
