God On Dale
God made an angel in heaven30 total reviews
Comment from Versch
This 21 Word Spiritual fiction is an excellent writing prompt entry. It uses all the six words that the contest mentioned. Really clever writing. I wish you luck in the contest. Best wishes!
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This 21 Word Spiritual fiction is an excellent writing prompt entry. It uses all the six words that the contest mentioned. Really clever writing. I wish you luck in the contest. Best wishes!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
Comment from royowen
It sounds a little like a super quick promotion to me, I think that's the way it will probably happen and the word says the grave has no power over us, nor the grave, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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It sounds a little like a super quick promotion to me, I think that's the way it will probably happen and the word says the grave has no power over us, nor the grave, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've done a great job of writing this spiritual piece of fiction, using the specific words required within the restrictions, Alcreator. Good luck in the contest.
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You've done a great job of writing this spiritual piece of fiction, using the specific words required within the restrictions, Alcreator. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from giraffmang
Hi sounds like Dale did the old 'if you grant me this one thing I'll never ask for another' and God made sure of it...
All the best
GMG
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Hi sounds like Dale did the old 'if you grant me this one thing I'll never ask for another' and God made sure of it...
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from Hawk37
Very nicely put especially with the constraints of the contest, probably going to take it home. wow with six words chosen out of 21 to use your word choice is already down by almost 1/3rd. Good job pulling it off.
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Very nicely put especially with the constraints of the contest, probably going to take it home. wow with six words chosen out of 21 to use your word choice is already down by almost 1/3rd. Good job pulling it off.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from tfawcus
This short piece meets the strictures of the contest and tells of a man who won the Nobel Prize in literature and was then recalled from Earth by the Heavenly Father.
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This short piece meets the strictures of the contest and tells of a man who won the Nobel Prize in literature and was then recalled from Earth by the Heavenly Father.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like your three sentence poem and you used all the correct words required. I didn't find any errors. I wonder what kind of book wins a Nobel prize? Great job. Shirley
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I like your three sentence poem and you used all the correct words required. I didn't find any errors. I wonder what kind of book wins a Nobel prize? Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
To write a twenty-one word spiritual story where six specific words are required to be used in the story is a difficult challenge that you have executed well. Best wishes in the contest.
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To write a twenty-one word spiritual story where six specific words are required to be used in the story is a difficult challenge that you have executed well. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I enjoyed reading. I see you used the necessary words for this prompt and told a wonderful story on how God helps us.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I enjoyed reading. I see you used the necessary words for this prompt and told a wonderful story on how God helps us.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from nomi338
From honor to honorific. Can there be anything bigger and better? Able to acknowledge praise from colleagues, then being raised to heaven to give praise to the greater creator, avoiding the criticism of jealous, lesser ones.
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From honor to honorific. Can there be anything bigger and better? Able to acknowledge praise from colleagues, then being raised to heaven to give praise to the greater creator, avoiding the criticism of jealous, lesser ones.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
