Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I've been there at that moment and felt the emotions wrapped in your words. It's impossible to watch your child slip away, but there is nothing you can do. It remains in God's hands. Wonderful choice of words.

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

Thank you for your read and understanding review. Much appreciated.

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao!

You now have 6 votes.

The words given were not easy and most entries just sounded off.

You narrative on the contrary, made sense and flowed well.

Well done!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

Thank you so much for the read and encouraging review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You used the required words well in context to tell your short story. I enjoyed reading it, though poignant. Your image choice is a great pairing with your well thought out story.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello HarryT a fantastic Friday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 42 word Spiritual fiction entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022

Thanks, 13th, for the read and encouraging review.