The Return
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This chapter is well written. It's difficult to think that Miles is everywhere Meg goes. Quite an eerie feeling when he suddenly appears, and she thinks he in the room with her even. The strange thing is that she never knew him until she bought the house.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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This chapter is well written. It's difficult to think that Miles is everywhere Meg goes. Quite an eerie feeling when he suddenly appears, and she thinks he in the room with her even. The strange thing is that she never knew him until she bought the house.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and the golden star, Rosemary! I can't say too much, because things will be changing soon, especially in chapter 9. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it sure is nice to finally be back home and reading those I appreciate every day. Now, I'll be even happier when I can catch up on the 60 plus reviews that I'm behind. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Well, it sure is nice to finally be back home and reading those I appreciate every day. Now, I'll be even happier when I can catch up on the 60 plus reviews that I'm behind. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Ric! I expect you'll soon get caught up. I hope you had a nice time? Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I love the way this book is shaping up, and turning out
to be a barn burner. For, the picture actually gets clearer
with a lot more twist and turns to the plot. Keep Writing.
And Stay Connected
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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I love the way this book is shaping up, and turning out
to be a barn burner. For, the picture actually gets clearer
with a lot more twist and turns to the plot. Keep Writing.
And Stay Connected
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading this part, BLACKTITANIUM86. I'm delighted you are enjoying this story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Pantygynt
A rather sketchy review for such a great chapter, but I am really off duty as you know and just making sure you get a six for the record. It deserves more and I am glad you got those pumps from Judy.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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A rather sketchy review for such a great chapter, but I am really off duty as you know and just making sure you get a six for the record. It deserves more and I am glad you got those pumps from Judy.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Aw, thank you, Jim. What a lovely compliment and the sixth star award. Judy is leaving the site now, but has my email address because she wants to carry on reading it. I expect you are one of the four she asking. I hope you are still enjoying yourself, and getting all the research for the American part of your book?? I'm looking forward to hearing all about it when you come home. Take care, and thank you again for your really lovely comments. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from alexisleech
This beautifully written chapter answered many questions, but also created a few more. Miles is dead, but in a sense, still alive. Margot is alive, but needs to be dead to be with Miles, and Bessie? The jury's still out on that one - she seems to be timeless!
I can't wait to see where you take us next with this fantastic story.
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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This beautifully written chapter answered many questions, but also created a few more. Miles is dead, but in a sense, still alive. Margot is alive, but needs to be dead to be with Miles, and Bessie? The jury's still out on that one - she seems to be timeless!
I can't wait to see where you take us next with this fantastic story.
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for this really lovely review, Alexis, I'm delighted you enjoyed this chapter. Bessie has everyone wondering, lol. Thank you also for the golden sixth star! Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from nomi338
Although I am joining this story late. I am intrigued and plan to stay for the ride. I will also go back into time to get the beginning, even though your notes get me to where I need in order to be to go forward.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Although I am joining this story late. I am intrigued and plan to stay for the ride. I will also go back into time to get the beginning, even though your notes get me to where I need in order to be to go forward.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Aw. Nomi, whenever you come it's always a pleasure to have you on board.Than you so much, my dear friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
The Crawleys are certainly creepy Crawleys,
who will give the reader the real creepy crawlies.
Bessie's pretty creepy herself.
I think the reader may need some of those digestive dunkers
before this story ends.
Perhaps Margot is an actual descendant of Meg,
like a great great granddaughter.
Unwed mothers in the 1800's. A different time.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Hello Sandra,
The Crawleys are certainly creepy Crawleys,
who will give the reader the real creepy crawlies.
Bessie's pretty creepy herself.
I think the reader may need some of those digestive dunkers
before this story ends.
Perhaps Margot is an actual descendant of Meg,
like a great great granddaughter.
Unwed mothers in the 1800's. A different time.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Well, you are the first one to come away from the 'reincarnation' of Meg, so that's good! :)) Bessie? She is a bit of an enigma, I have to go with that. LOL. Thank you, Robert, for this lovely review and the sixth golden star. You know how much I appreciate your support. Thanks, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from dmt1967
This is another good chapter and it is very well written. The story really pulled me in the further I read. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thank you for sharing and take care.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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This is another good chapter and it is very well written. The story really pulled me in the further I read. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, my friend, for another of your really lovely reviews. I do appreciate you a lot. Warm hugs! Sandra xx
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Sandra,
Vey good continuation once again. Things are heating up now. I'd give Bessie a slap though, just to see if I could... lol
So, why have I got this creepy feeling ... one of them belongs to me? For goodness sake, Margot, now you're being ridiculous, I'm here, and I'm alive ... aren't I? - I can't speak for anyone else, but when I would think of such things I wouldn't switch between referring to myself as I and you. I don't know if I'd switch in thought between first and second person. See what you think?
The words seemed to float in the air, then gently move like a caress through Margot's mind. - that's a really nice line.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Hi Sandra,
Vey good continuation once again. Things are heating up now. I'd give Bessie a slap though, just to see if I could... lol
So, why have I got this creepy feeling ... one of them belongs to me? For goodness sake, Margot, now you're being ridiculous, I'm here, and I'm alive ... aren't I? - I can't speak for anyone else, but when I would think of such things I wouldn't switch between referring to myself as I and you. I don't know if I'd switch in thought between first and second person. See what you think?
The words seemed to float in the air, then gently move like a caress through Margot's mind. - that's a really nice line.
All the best
G
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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You are absolutely right, Gareth. I've changed that line now, taking out, Margot, and changing, you're to I.
I have some other reviewers who think Bessie is creepy, and other things, lol.
Thanks so much for this review, my friend, I'm pleased you are still hanging in with me. Warm hugs, :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Sanku
Bessie seems to be a person with the otherworld connections. She is human (hopefully) ,but she knows so much about Miles and Meg!
'he has been waiting for you to go back to him'..what a spooky ending.
Since I was away i read both the chapters together...
Bessie suddenly appearing in the grave yard gave me shivers....
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Bessie seems to be a person with the otherworld connections. She is human (hopefully) ,but she knows so much about Miles and Meg!
'he has been waiting for you to go back to him'..what a spooky ending.
Since I was away i read both the chapters together...
Bessie suddenly appearing in the grave yard gave me shivers....
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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I'm loving the ideas everyone has of Bessie. You're is really good. :) Thank you so much, my friend, for another lovely review. Warm hugs. Sandra xx