Waiting For The Day
Personification contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Personification contest. You followed the rules of the contest well.
I like the personification of the underwear! LoL... Very clever.
The story flows nicely and it's easy to follow.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the Personification contest. You followed the rules of the contest well.
I like the personification of the underwear! LoL... Very clever.
The story flows nicely and it's easy to follow.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Gypsy. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Inventive. Cute. Hopeful that like her drawers in the drawers, one day, I too, will be used once again...............................................................................
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Inventive. Cute. Hopeful that like her drawers in the drawers, one day, I too, will be used once again...............................................................................
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Tom. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from SimianSavant
This does a good job of covering the subject, no bones about it. The greater danger is in the rearview. Don't scratch and sniff when the fabric is thin.
Cleverly done, and subtle enough to maintain the mystery until the end, at least for some readers who did not adequately examine the picture at the beginning. The picture is a great edit too.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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This does a good job of covering the subject, no bones about it. The greater danger is in the rearview. Don't scratch and sniff when the fabric is thin.
Cleverly done, and subtle enough to maintain the mystery until the end, at least for some readers who did not adequately examine the picture at the beginning. The picture is a great edit too.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Lol. Don't scratch and sniff. Thank you for the great review, D. I appreciate the stars and chuckle, friend. The pic actually took a lot longer to create than the piece. Lol. Have a good one.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is extremely amusing. For a good way through I thought it was science fiction and we were considering beings in a state of suspended animation. Good use of misdirection on your part.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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This is extremely amusing. For a good way through I thought it was science fiction and we were considering beings in a state of suspended animation. Good use of misdirection on your part.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Katherine. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Thank you rider for showing this on this day yesterday creative peace peace stay focused and dedicated thanks again great job continue doing you And that's all the accounts great
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thank you rider for showing this on this day yesterday creative peace peace stay focused and dedicated thanks again great job continue doing you And that's all the accounts great
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thanks for the review, GG
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You're welcome
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Might you have any suggestions on how it could be improved? A 4 star rating means adjustments are needed.
Thanks again.
