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Man's Best Friend Suffers

Benny is dog-napped.

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Comment from Terry Broxson
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A very sad story for this contest, good luck. Clearly banning the practice does not do any good. Authorities need to seek out and prosecute these people just like they did Michael Vick, famous quarterback.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    I'd never heard of Michael Vick before you mentioned him (I live in New Zealand, where American football has a very small following), so I googled him and see he was involved in a dog-fighting operation. I'm pleased he was punished, which hopefully had an impact on showing others there are consequences for cruelty.
reply by Terry Broxson on 12-Feb-2022
    Yes he was punished, spent time in prison, got out, got a new gig on TV as a commentator, he is doing just fine. Which is too bad. Terry.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Better punishment for him to be stuffed and mounted as a trophy himself.
Comment from victor 66
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You'd think that after thousands of years that man should have evolved into something more than fighting dogs, which is incredibly primitive. There should be harsher penalties for people who do this . Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022

Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

Certainly this is a cruel and inhuman sort of prisoner for human sport. It's kinda of hard to believe that there are people out there who would enjoy(?) this kind of thing AND people who would allow their own 'pets' to be used in this way for 'entertainment'. AArrgh.

This made a good entry for the contest. Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022

Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred-word short story, Man's Best Friend Suffers, has the required word limitations and seems to have run out of words. This ends on a social commentary rather than a conclusion.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022

Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Dog fighting is a vicious way of treating an animal. I watched a movie one time where they had dog fighting. It was definitely cruel to watch; sometimes the dog never makes it through to live.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022

Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Terrible. Not the entry but the life and death of canine that could have been a friend to someone. I know when sad my dog knows and puts he nose on my lap and with droopy eyes says all will be right.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2022

Comment from royowen
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Dog fighting is an ultra cruel "sport" with equally cruel people in attendance, where I presume they gamble on the outcome of the fight, I'm pretty sure the RSPCA, or whatever animal protection service is nationally available, an excellent entry in this contrast, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2022

Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello mystery writer a terrific Thursday to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your The Prisoner writing prompt entry, I think you executed it well. Sad and Disgusting that people can treat anything that cruelly. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2022

Comment from Wendy G
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Your story speaks of a cruel and horrific practice, and shows how low mankind can go. Your story is very moving, and at the very least I hope it raises awareness about this barbaric contest. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2022

Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

It is true that our barbarity appears to have no bounds when it comes to things like this, mind you, we don't exactly treat each other with much tolerance or respect either.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2022