Buzzed She Was
8 line poem4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This could be a combination of a cautionary tale and a great metaphor. This speaks strongly of addiction. This could be tongue-in-cheek humor or a tragicomedy.Great story
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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This could be a combination of a cautionary tale and a great metaphor. This speaks strongly of addiction. This could be tongue-in-cheek humor or a tragicomedy.Great story
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your unique interpretation! That's something I didn't think about, and I like your take on the poem. Hugs.
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***smile***
Comment from Begin Again
Cute! And makes one think of springtime.... soon would be good! The little ole bee had the right idea for sure... Drink and be merry!
Hey, girl...where have you been? I am thrilled to see your name pop up this morning and have been wondering about you. I hope all is okay... or did you eat too much ice cream?
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Cute! And makes one think of springtime.... soon would be good! The little ole bee had the right idea for sure... Drink and be merry!
Hey, girl...where have you been? I am thrilled to see your name pop up this morning and have been wondering about you. I hope all is okay... or did you eat too much ice cream?
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Hey, girl! Actually, I was going to cancel my subscription, but my husband encouraged me to start writing again? So, I did. I really do love to write. I'm glad to be back. How's everything going with you? Hugs and blessings always, my friend.
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I am glad you are back and all is well. As for my life...it's as upside down as it was, but I am wading through the muck!
Sorry I am so far behind on answering reviews and giving thank yous.
Love ya, Carol
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Imaginative I take it was required to piece together eight lines about a bumble lost, then found only to be lost once more in a hole where the cork wasn't present.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Imaginative I take it was required to piece together eight lines about a bumble lost, then found only to be lost once more in a hole where the cork wasn't present.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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The prompt was to write a poem of eight lines where a B mistakes a glass of wine for a flower. :-) Thanks for the review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good response to the writing prompt. a bee buzzed on chardonnay. It makes me laugh to think of that happening. Well done and keep up the good work!!!!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Good response to the writing prompt. a bee buzzed on chardonnay. It makes me laugh to think of that happening. Well done and keep up the good work!!!!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your kind and generous review and comments. I appreciate them.
