Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-word short story, Life and Love, has the required word limitations, but seems to end without a final reply from Tommy. You did get "prisoner" in there.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Paul McFarland

Good

Good idea, but I think you should have used the words that you had left for a little more development. I think Jane's last words could have been better.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

Yes - sometimes these mini stories can be quite a challenge - thanks for sharing zanya

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is an excellent story on the subject of Prisoner. It is well-written and filled with emotion. I see this is an entry for a contest so I wish you all the luck in the world. Nicely done and to the point.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Great flash fiction for the writing prompt. The ending caught me completely off guard and shocked me. Great ending. YOu weaved your way to this ending in a very concise and short way. Well don.e

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

Great review zanya