Brian And Carol
They did many things together5 total reviews
Comment from writer723
This romance story was beautiful and touching. I enjoyed reading it immensely. You demonstrated how two people can fall in love so easily. I don't know if this writing is based on a true story or not. However, your writing really brought the characters to life. Thank you for sharing this sweet tale of true love.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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This romance story was beautiful and touching. I enjoyed reading it immensely. You demonstrated how two people can fall in love so easily. I don't know if this writing is based on a true story or not. However, your writing really brought the characters to life. Thank you for sharing this sweet tale of true love.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Comment from Patty Palmer
This is an enjoyable love at first sight story. It sounds like the two hit it off from the very beginning. The only thing I would say is the story could have ended a little more on a bigger note. Like maybe they got married and lived happily ever after. LOL Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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This is an enjoyable love at first sight story. It sounds like the two hit it off from the very beginning. The only thing I would say is the story could have ended a little more on a bigger note. Like maybe they got married and lived happily ever after. LOL Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
What a nice composition. I enjoyed it as it took me back some sixty years ago which in turn made me remember many of the things your characters
did. That said, one of your competitors was a trifle better.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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What a nice composition. I enjoyed it as it took me back some sixty years ago which in turn made me remember many of the things your characters
did. That said, one of your competitors was a trifle better.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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A trifle better?
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Comment from Anne Johnston
You have written a very good story about two people meeting for the first time, and finding they had a lot in common. I like how they took it slow, getting to know each other over a period of time.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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You have written a very good story about two people meeting for the first time, and finding they had a lot in common. I like how they took it slow, getting to know each other over a period of time.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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You are welcome
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Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the Love At First Sight writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend! You seemed to have adhered to contest rules and the storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and it is very well written and well thought out;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Perfect entry for the Love At First Sight writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend! You seemed to have adhered to contest rules and the storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and it is very well written and well thought out;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thanks.
