Ageless Anger
Somewhere deep inside lives...11 total reviews
Comment from AliMom
Hi BoogieNights. Great job personifying anger. Great imagery. Congratulations on your first prize win. Much deserved. You keep writing girl. Very nice work,
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Hi BoogieNights. Great job personifying anger. Great imagery. Congratulations on your first prize win. Much deserved. You keep writing girl. Very nice work,
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this positive review. :)
Comment from Jamal Blair
Congrats on winning! You did an amazing job with this poem! Such passion! I can see why people gravitated towards it. It's like this poem is electric! You have such a great way with words and your vernacular is fantastic! Keep up the amazing work!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Congrats on winning! You did an amazing job with this poem! Such passion! I can see why people gravitated towards it. It's like this poem is electric! You have such a great way with words and your vernacular is fantastic! Keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this fantastic review, it's so appreciated. :)
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You're very welcome! Congratulations, again!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You definitely have touched the hearts and soul in this poem. No one wants to get angry but sometimes the anger will fester, and it needs to get out; like they say, get rid of the bitter feelings stored up inside.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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You definitely have touched the hearts and soul in this poem. No one wants to get angry but sometimes the anger will fester, and it needs to get out; like they say, get rid of the bitter feelings stored up inside.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is an amazing poem. You did a great job portraying this "animal" in human form. I had difficulty trying to enter this contest. Now I understand what personification meant. I would think your entry has a good chance of winning. Good luck!
Patty
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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This is an amazing poem. You did a great job portraying this "animal" in human form. I had difficulty trying to enter this contest. Now I understand what personification meant. I would think your entry has a good chance of winning. Good luck!
Patty
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thank you, I did win! I appreciate your kind words. :)
Comment from Wendy G
What an excellent poem! Yes, there is a measure of anger within each of us ... and you have personified this emotion with great skill and care, and smooth rhyme and metre. Best wishes for your excellent entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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What an excellent poem! Yes, there is a measure of anger within each of us ... and you have personified this emotion with great skill and care, and smooth rhyme and metre. Best wishes for your excellent entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thanks for this fine review, it's very nice of you. :)
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Yes, there is a anger in every human being,
that causes a strong series of event. Nevertheless,
I was always taught to try and never get angry,
cause it opens you up for demon possession.
Anyway, your skills are on fire. Keep Writing. And
don't forget to stop by, to talk to me. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Yes, there is a anger in every human being,
that causes a strong series of event. Nevertheless,
I was always taught to try and never get angry,
cause it opens you up for demon possession.
Anyway, your skills are on fire. Keep Writing. And
don't forget to stop by, to talk to me. Stay Connected
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review. I'll be sure to look at your portfolio...have a wonderful day. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Apart from so accurately depicting this dangerous emotion, your poem touches on the two main scary aspects of anger - that it is becoming more and more prevalent in our society, and that it lurks within each of us, awaiting its moment to burst forth out of control.
Query:
they'll be no recompense... (should this perhaps be there'll ?)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Apart from so accurately depicting this dangerous emotion, your poem touches on the two main scary aspects of anger - that it is becoming more and more prevalent in our society, and that it lurks within each of us, awaiting its moment to burst forth out of control.
Query:
they'll be no recompense... (should this perhaps be there'll ?)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thanks for reading and for the correction. I really appreciate both. :)
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:)))
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a wonderful example of getting into the persona of anger and describing its ultimate effects. The rhyming is perfect. Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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This is a wonderful example of getting into the persona of anger and describing its ultimate effects. The rhyming is perfect. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you, I like writing these. I appreciate this nice review. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the ubiquitous nature of anger worldwide, most especially among politicians.
The work highlights the all pervading nature of the malaise and it has developed firm roots in virtually all spheres of human endeavour.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of rhymes and personification.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the ubiquitous nature of anger worldwide, most especially among politicians.
The work highlights the all pervading nature of the malaise and it has developed firm roots in virtually all spheres of human endeavour.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of rhymes and personification.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this insightful review.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great response to the writing prompt. You personified ageless anger that lives somewhere deep inside us. This anger can be triggered by so many things and cause such damage. Well done.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Great response to the writing prompt. You personified ageless anger that lives somewhere deep inside us. This anger can be triggered by so many things and cause such damage. Well done.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this wonderful review. :)
