Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Well, you hit the word count right on the nose with no issues. i was sort of expecting something more come the ending following the almost poetic nature of Ceridwen's initial dialogue. I sighed along with her. lol

It's mystery is captivating. -the possessive form of it is its without the apostrophe.

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022

Thanks for pointing that stray apostrophe out - I changed the sentence and forgot to change that.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 70 Word Flash Fiction Contest Entry.
After reading yes I was trying to figure out who was the bigger fool the one trying to see the moon or the one blocking it?
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This was Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1034

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022