Ceridwen and the Fool
Two people looking at the moon. (70 words)12 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
It was a very interesting story that you entered into the 70 word flash fiction contest. I quite enjoyed it and I thought you deserved to be in first place. But Better luck next time. Best wishes.
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It was a very interesting story that you entered into the 70 word flash fiction contest. I quite enjoyed it and I thought you deserved to be in first place. But Better luck next time. Best wishes.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 70 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest. Good word count. Interesting theme. Engaging plot. Well developed characters.
Interesting story about the moon.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the 70 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest. Good word count. Interesting theme. Engaging plot. Well developed characters.
Interesting story about the moon.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-word story, Ceridwen and the Fool, has the proper word count and captures a funny moment of both wonder and Brickness.
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This seventy-word story, Ceridwen and the Fool, has the proper word count and captures a funny moment of both wonder and Brickness.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
In your story, you are telling us that it is not always good to point fingers. How many times we have looked at pointing fingers and wonder what they are talking about. Never considered being called a fool though.
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In your story, you are telling us that it is not always good to point fingers. How many times we have looked at pointing fingers and wonder what they are talking about. Never considered being called a fool though.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
So far I enjoyed this piece best but there are another ten to go so don't hold your breath. Good luck in your venture to win this contest. WE can only hope can't we?
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So far I enjoyed this piece best but there are another ten to go so don't hold your breath. Good luck in your venture to win this contest. WE can only hope can't we?
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely story with a fine and funny twist at the end. I enjoyed your informative Author's Notes as well. It's different and engaging. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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A lovely story with a fine and funny twist at the end. I enjoyed your informative Author's Notes as well. It's different and engaging. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Such a cool story and extra kudos for giving us the background to the name, Ceridwen! And I'm guessing the "Brick" isn't as complimentary as in Aussie/British slang bur perhaps he's as thick as one. Lol
Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Such a cool story and extra kudos for giving us the background to the name, Ceridwen! And I'm guessing the "Brick" isn't as complimentary as in Aussie/British slang bur perhaps he's as thick as one. Lol
Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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I'm pleased you got why I chose Brick as his name, haha.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Damn!!! One should recognize how gifted a writer
is, when he/she is asked to write a fictional story,
and the artist does just that, while simultaneously
making fiction touch the reader, in the form of
Poetry In Motion. Nevertheless, this is dope poem.
And I look forward to reading more. Stay Connected.
And don't forget to stop by, and talk to me.
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Damn!!! One should recognize how gifted a writer
is, when he/she is asked to write a fictional story,
and the artist does just that, while simultaneously
making fiction touch the reader, in the form of
Poetry In Motion. Nevertheless, this is dope poem.
And I look forward to reading more. Stay Connected.
And don't forget to stop by, and talk to me.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
How fools listen the stories, facts or anything one describes under reference to the fairy tales or something mysterious or true but they merely listen and look at the speaker's finger; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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How fools listen the stories, facts or anything one describes under reference to the fairy tales or something mysterious or true but they merely listen and look at the speaker's finger; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from humpwhistle
So true. Sight is of little value without true vision. I'm sure we all succumb to what's obvious at the expense of what is meaningful every now and again. Thanks for reminding me to keep my min, as well a my eyes, open.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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So true. Sight is of little value without true vision. I'm sure we all succumb to what's obvious at the expense of what is meaningful every now and again. Thanks for reminding me to keep my min, as well a my eyes, open.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
