"The Book of Death"
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Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem. Based on Elvis's suspicious minds. You move the poem through a series of trouble. times that are suspicious minds but reinforce the fact that you are trapped because you love your baby and can't leave. Wonderful flow in the poem.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Great poem. Based on Elvis's suspicious minds. You move the poem through a series of trouble. times that are suspicious minds but reinforce the fact that you are trapped because you love your baby and can't leave. Wonderful flow in the poem.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thanks again Theodore.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a contest entry. It rhymed. makes sense, was spiritual, and touched the reader emotionally. I liked how you worked the song lyrics into the poem. Very nice job. stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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This should have been a contest entry. It rhymed. makes sense, was spiritual, and touched the reader emotionally. I liked how you worked the song lyrics into the poem. Very nice job. stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your review Earl and have a blessed week.
Doctor Ricky 1024