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Because of Him ...18 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is very interesting and deep with feelings. I would recommend looking at the way these two lines are worded.
"Jesus Himself will come and take you to Father God in Heaven.
You'll have a perfect resurrection body like Jesus Himself."
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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This is very interesting and deep with feelings. I would recommend looking at the way these two lines are worded.
"Jesus Himself will come and take you to Father God in Heaven.
You'll have a perfect resurrection body like Jesus Himself."
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you Lancellot, for your thoughtful review. I have checked the wording in the lines, but I have missed what you wanted me to see. Can you enlighten me please?
Wendy
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Never mind, you are writing in a different English.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great entry for the 39 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. Good form according to the contest requirements.
Some people like to believe in angels, it gives them hope.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Great entry for the 39 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. Good form according to the contest requirements.
Some people like to believe in angels, it gives them hope.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy, thoughtful review. Yes, I too believe in angels, but as a different created form, and they are God's servants. Fascinating to think about the life to come!
Wendy
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is well written. I like the opening sentence. The answer flows well and it explains what happens when one passes away.
I wish everyone goes to heaven when the day comes.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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This is well written. I like the opening sentence. The answer flows well and it explains what happens when one passes away.
I wish everyone goes to heaven when the day comes.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your compassionate and thoughtful review.
Wendy
Comment from Shirley McLain
So very true for us Christians. This is a beautiful picture that you have painted. I did not see any mistakes. You did a great job. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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So very true for us Christians. This is a beautiful picture that you have painted. I did not see any mistakes. You did a great job. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Shirley for your very encouraging revie and good wishes. Greatly appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-nine-word spiritual story, That's Good, has the proper word count and provides a poignant conversation between mother and child which affects the readers most of all.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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This thirty-nine-word spiritual story, That's Good, has the proper word count and provides a poignant conversation between mother and child which affects the readers most of all.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you Bill, for your thoughtful words in your review. Appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Begin Again
An unbelievable conversation when a child knows and understands, but still questions what may happen at Heaven's Gate. I know their are several views on the hereafter, for me, I will be content with just being accepted at the gates.
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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An unbelievable conversation when a child knows and understands, but still questions what may happen at Heaven's Gate. I know their are several views on the hereafter, for me, I will be content with just being accepted at the gates.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Yes, me too! Thank you for a lovely review, and a thoughtful one.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
I'm glad you said that, even Christian say that we become angels, or they say the little ones do, scripture tells us we will judge Angels, probably fallen ones but still. Beautifully written Wendy, you deserve to win, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I'm glad you said that, even Christian say that we become angels, or they say the little ones do, scripture tells us we will judge Angels, probably fallen ones but still. Beautifully written Wendy, you deserve to win, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you Roy, for your super review. Yes, I think angels often get credit for what God Himself is doing! I appreciate as always your thoughts.
Wendy
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That?s right,
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading. What happens to us after we die is always an interesting conversation. All I am positive of is God's promise that if we believe in Him, His grace will cover us.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading. What happens to us after we die is always an interesting conversation. All I am positive of is God's promise that if we believe in Him, His grace will cover us.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Barbara. Yes, it is interesting and particularly relevant as we grow older. Salvation by faith in Jesus is certainly just by His grace.
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sad words here and comfort of an afterlife in heaven is given to a child. My friend has a very sick Grandchild just now so I found these words touching Wendy, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Sad words here and comfort of an afterlife in heaven is given to a child. My friend has a very sick Grandchild just now so I found these words touching Wendy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you Dolly for your kind and understanding review. It is so devastating when we see children suffering, and I pray your friend's grandchild will come through. The price of love is grief, and we do experience it, and God knows and understands, and walks with us through it, but it's still hard!
Wendy
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My friend?s Granddaughter is receiving palliative care just now, she will not recover. My friend is strong, but this situation has taken its toll on her life, love Dolly x
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Oh so sad. Feeling for her, that's so hard, and the journey will be a long hard one for your friend.
Hugs,
Wendy
Comment from LisaMay
A poignant write in an obviously harrowing family situation, but faith and careful explanations can bring comfort in such times. You've presented a truly spiritual mini story here - 39 words in 6 sentences is very specific and you have coped with the strictures admirably.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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A poignant write in an obviously harrowing family situation, but faith and careful explanations can bring comfort in such times. You've presented a truly spiritual mini story here - 39 words in 6 sentences is very specific and you have coped with the strictures admirably.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Jenny. A super review. Yes, one has to be very careful to meet all requirements. So I did double check.
Wendy
