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When life ends for the homeless33 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That has to be a winner, Carol, it's perfect. That the man was a homeless veteran says a lot, for a start he shouldn't have been homeless. I'm glad he was made welcome by St Peter at Heaven's door. Loved it, my friend. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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That has to be a winner, Carol, it's perfect. That the man was a homeless veteran says a lot, for a start he shouldn't have been homeless. I'm glad he was made welcome by St Peter at Heaven's door. Loved it, my friend. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi Sandra. It's taken me all day to force myself to sit at this computer... but I am glad I did. I saw the contest and it touched my heart. Thanks for the review and your kindness.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
Isn't that both lovely and reassuring Carol. The wondrous gift of merciful grace gives to the least of God's people, and not clothing, or riches, or what people think, purely on the goodness, grace and mercy of our saviour, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Isn't that both lovely and reassuring Carol. The wondrous gift of merciful grace gives to the least of God's people, and not clothing, or riches, or what people think, purely on the goodness, grace and mercy of our saviour, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I've been scolding myself all day and doctoring my invisible wounds so I am pleased that when I finally settled in front of the computer, God's presence was with me. first thing I saw was the contest...which I don't usually enter.. but I knew exactly what I wanted to write. I hope the message is clear.
Hugs, Carol
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Well done
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Thank you
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My privilege Carol
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What wonderful writing. The tempo was perfect and so was the flow. Your message is a positive one to me. That a person can have short comings but prevail. Keep writing.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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What wonderful writing. The tempo was perfect and so was the flow. Your message is a positive one to me. That a person can have short comings but prevail. Keep writing.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and thoughts. It's difficult to express one's feelings when the story is limited to 39 words and six sentences. I hope my message was clear. Thank you!
Hugs, Carol
