Food Chain
Survival of the fittest4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is well done. Not everyone gets the point of Diamante poetry. I learned about it while teaching my 6th graders poetry. It has become my favorite even beside Haiku poetry. By separating the themes you really show the imbalance in the 4th verse. Well done. I am voting for this one & A+
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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This is well done. Not everyone gets the point of Diamante poetry. I learned about it while teaching my 6th graders poetry. It has become my favorite even beside Haiku poetry. By separating the themes you really show the imbalance in the 4th verse. Well done. I am voting for this one & A+
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for the wonderful rating and review. I am honored!
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I liked the message in here
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh this was so good!
only suggestion i could make would be to maybe try "runner, hider" instead of victim, casualty.... just a thought!
good diamonte - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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ooh this was so good!
only suggestion i could make would be to maybe try "runner, hider" instead of victim, casualty.... just a thought!
good diamonte - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the review, the suggestions, and the good luck wishes.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
This poetry form is a dictionary and antonym entry. It can be fun.
The poem flows well. The words are simple and straight forward. The word chosen speaks of the food chain.
A good read. Good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This poetry form is a dictionary and antonym entry. It can be fun.
The poem flows well. The words are simple and straight forward. The word chosen speaks of the food chain.
A good read. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks! Thank you for taking the time to review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a well-written Diamonte poem for a contest, good luck in the contest. This is very clever. You have done a marvelous job of writing to meet the requirements of the poem. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This is a well-written Diamonte poem for a contest, good luck in the contest. This is very clever. You have done a marvelous job of writing to meet the requirements of the poem. Excellent work.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and the good luck wishes.
