Evil
The serpent16 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Justafan,
This is a well formatted free verse poem. The short lines add emphasis to the words. It gives good advice on how to rein in the evil and allow us to live in peace and hope.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Justafan,
This is a well formatted free verse poem. The short lines add emphasis to the words. It gives good advice on how to rein in the evil and allow us to live in peace and hope.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
Thank you for this lovely review of my work. I?ve been away with family issues for awhile. Again, thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Always
Justafan of yours
M
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from l.raven
Hi Missy, so good to see you my sweet friend....
I feel like there's evil starting to surround me...
I find myself telling satan to get away...and know
God is there to protect me...that I am safe in His hands...
I love your poem sweet girl...very well written...and the picture...EEEEKKKK...a poem for thought...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Hi Missy, so good to see you my sweet friend....
I feel like there's evil starting to surround me...
I find myself telling satan to get away...and know
God is there to protect me...that I am safe in His hands...
I love your poem sweet girl...very well written...and the picture...EEEEKKKK...a poem for thought...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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I understand completely, I feel it too!
Lol at the "EEEEKKK"!
Thank you my sweet friend for the lovely review. X
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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always so welcome Missy...hope you are doing well my sweet friend...love xxoo
Comment from amahra
OMG! I am going to get you. LOL! Don't you know I have snake phobia? LOL! Thanks a lot, I'll see this artwork in my dreams...just kidding. But I do have a fear of snakes. Loved this poem--full of truth and warnings to guard our souls. Can't think of a better artwork to get our attention. Great job.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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OMG! I am going to get you. LOL! Don't you know I have snake phobia? LOL! Thanks a lot, I'll see this artwork in my dreams...just kidding. But I do have a fear of snakes. Loved this poem--full of truth and warnings to guard our souls. Can't think of a better artwork to get our attention. Great job.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Oh lord no! I don?t like them either or spiders! Yuk!!
I love love love this review! You made my day.
Oh and thank you for the lovely bling as well! X
Always
Justafan of yours my friend
Missy
Comment from Heather Burroughs
This is an incredibly powerful poem from start to finish. The message is clear and strong, it gave me chills. Fantastic work!
Thank you for sharing.
Many blessings to you.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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This is an incredibly powerful poem from start to finish. The message is clear and strong, it gave me chills. Fantastic work!
Thank you for sharing.
Many blessings to you.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Hi Heather. Thank you for the awesome review and the Bling of the 6.
I?m happy this touched you it?s all any writer can hope for. :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
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You are most welcome, Missy! It was well deserved.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poem even if it's not your usual style. The presentation is great--the color scheme, the image, the formatting of lines, and your well thought out words. Your words are rue--there's evil lurking inside all and it take devotion to His word and teachings to overcome it.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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You did a great job with your poem even if it's not your usual style. The presentation is great--the color scheme, the image, the formatting of lines, and your well thought out words. Your words are rue--there's evil lurking inside all and it take devotion to His word and teachings to overcome it.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Jan. I?m happy to see your name in my reviews. I will be returning the favor :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from sue133
A confronting poem written extremely well. You have described both good and evil and we do have both inside of us. The difficulty is navigating one's way to tread the good path. I loved the artwork and your use of colour.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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A confronting poem written extremely well. You have described both good and evil and we do have both inside of us. The difficulty is navigating one's way to tread the good path. I loved the artwork and your use of colour.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Well thank you very much. Not my usual so I?m delighted you liked it.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is dramatically descriptive and realistic in its contrast of the Devil and evil and God and His love. The only way to keep our flesh from ruling our actions and our minds is to stay close to the Lord.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Your poem is dramatically descriptive and realistic in its contrast of the Devil and evil and God and His love. The only way to keep our flesh from ruling our actions and our minds is to stay close to the Lord.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Janice for the lovely review. It's a big chance going so far off my normal genre and being a religious post to boot. So many belief systems on FanStory I would hate to offend anyone.
Again, Thank you
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Such powerful words with an equally powerful message. We'll done! Your poem was heavy but ended light with parting words to ponder. Please keep writing and submitting.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Such powerful words with an equally powerful message. We'll done! Your poem was heavy but ended light with parting words to ponder. Please keep writing and submitting.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi KLR, thank you for the lovely Read and Review:)
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Gee
Very nice spiritual poem ma'am. The snake image is a little scary especially with the red color scheme.
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us. It is appreciated.
Gee
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Very nice spiritual poem ma'am. The snake image is a little scary especially with the red color scheme.
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us. It is appreciated.
Gee
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hello Gee. It?s nice to see a new face in my reviews. I?m delighted you found something of worth :)
Always
Justafan
Comment from royowen
Thank you for being honest and conscious of the propensity of the flesh to respond to temptation Missy. But before I was awakened by the Spirit of God, dignity wasn't something I possessed a great amount of, so I responded, but really, God knows there is also a part of us that needs integrity and dignity to be enlivened in us to resist with God.'s help, I never really thought about it till this morning, thank you for this great post. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for being honest and conscious of the propensity of the flesh to respond to temptation Missy. But before I was awakened by the Spirit of God, dignity wasn't something I possessed a great amount of, so I responded, but really, God knows there is also a part of us that needs integrity and dignity to be enlivened in us to resist with God.'s help, I never really thought about it till this morning, thank you for this great post. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I?ve waited all day for your review:)
It was worth the wait.
Thank you, Roy
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Well done
