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Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem very much- very classy picture for a classy gal- poem is dimensional- with a metaphorical story line that brings a smile - well done my dear
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I like this poem very much- very classy picture for a classy gal- poem is dimensional- with a metaphorical story line that brings a smile - well done my dear
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and six stars, AP. I am glad you like it. Have a lovely day. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
A great tanka, Gypsy. I absolutely loved the picture, it looked so whimsical. Your words were great- the White Egret Orchid actually swayed in the breeze and made the other flowers envious. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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A great tanka, Gypsy. I absolutely loved the picture, it looked so whimsical. Your words were great- the White Egret Orchid actually swayed in the breeze and made the other flowers envious. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your time and review. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That is such a gorgeous flower! No wonder it's the envy of all the flowers in the Emperor's courtyard. Your tanka took us from the wild natural environment to the special care of the royal garden.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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That is such a gorgeous flower! No wonder it's the envy of all the flowers in the Emperor's courtyard. Your tanka took us from the wild natural environment to the special care of the royal garden.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen, you're very kind. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
"White Egret Orchid"
A Tanka for the club.
Written nicely, smooth as the Petals of this Orchid.
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It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Love Flowers!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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"White Egret Orchid"
A Tanka for the club.
Written nicely, smooth as the Petals of this Orchid.
...
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Love Flowers!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Ricky, you're very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and is it a flower or a hummingbird hovering over a small white flower and draining it of life giving nutrients. It's a bi-pic, could go either way!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and is it a flower or a hummingbird hovering over a small white flower and draining it of life giving nutrients. It's a bi-pic, could go either way!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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LoL is an orchid. Thank you very much, Mike.