She Was Surely Not
I will miss her37 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I liked it and thought all six stanza would have the same wording in lines one but weren't in four or five. Also, everything was positive of the lady until stanza four where you wrote: "I don't know why she was unkind."
I would think a question here could be asked such as: I know not when she was unkind." idk It's not mine to change.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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I liked it and thought all six stanza would have the same wording in lines one but weren't in four or five. Also, everything was positive of the lady until stanza four where you wrote: "I don't know why she was unkind."
I would think a question here could be asked such as: I know not when she was unkind." idk It's not mine to change.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you Tim for your thoughtful and understanding review. I appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dmt1967
T his poem made me think of my aunt. She was always kind to me, no one else mind you. I like this poem and you painted your aunt as a kind loving person. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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T his poem made me think of my aunt. She was always kind to me, no one else mind you. I like this poem and you painted your aunt as a kind loving person. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from MissMerri
I love how you wrote this tribute poem. It reeks of honesty and creativity with its clear statements about Aunt Edna snd how she lived her life, while showing how much she meant to you. I also loved the abundance of slant rhymes used bravely throughout the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this gracious poem. My condolences.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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I love how you wrote this tribute poem. It reeks of honesty and creativity with its clear statements about Aunt Edna snd how she lived her life, while showing how much she meant to you. I also loved the abundance of slant rhymes used bravely throughout the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this gracious poem. My condolences.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and those special stars for my poem about my aunt. Thank you too for noticing the slant rhymes. I wasn?t sure they would work. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
Janet,
This shows you don't have to be rich and famous to be important to the lives of people. Some people's actions are hard to understand. In the photo of her she looks a little mean or judgemental.
Sorry for your loss.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Janet,
This shows you don't have to be rich and famous to be important to the lives of people. Some people's actions are hard to understand. In the photo of her she looks a little mean or judgemental.
Sorry for your loss.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you Joan for your thoughtful and encouraging review and your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome on all accounts, Janet.
Joan
Comment from karenina
God bless your Aunt Edna! Often we do not know what bends in another's journey makes them contrary, or less than kind. Enough that you loved her and remember her with a benevolent heart! - Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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God bless your Aunt Edna! Often we do not know what bends in another's journey makes them contrary, or less than kind. Enough that you loved her and remember her with a benevolent heart! - Karenina
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you Karenina for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
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Always nice to read your work!
Comment from BethShelby
Some people are hard to get to know and hard to understand and because of the other may misjudge them. They might make great friends if someone really understood them well. It would be sad if you were her only friend but at least she did have one.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Some people are hard to get to know and hard to understand and because of the other may misjudge them. They might make great friends if someone really understood them well. It would be sad if you were her only friend but at least she did have one.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you Beth for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gloria ....
What a most unique theme, and yes sometimes this happens and like you say, the real reasons are largely unknown.
Excellent rhyme and flow here, and I bet Aunt Edna would be thrilled with such recognition from you.
Many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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What a most unique theme, and yes sometimes this happens and like you say, the real reasons are largely unknown.
Excellent rhyme and flow here, and I bet Aunt Edna would be thrilled with such recognition from you.
Many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you Gloria for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Raul1
This is an interesting poem. I think that you have written your poem well. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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This is an interesting poem. I think that you have written your poem well. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you Raul for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome! God bless you!
Comment from victor 66
Your aunt reminds me a great deal of my grandmother. She was quiet and often solemn but her kindnesses, especially towards me, will never be forgotten. She was the most influential person in my life. 36 years after her death I still try to be like her. I relate to your poem and to your relationship with your aunt. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Your aunt reminds me a great deal of my grandmother. She was quiet and often solemn but her kindnesses, especially towards me, will never be forgotten. She was the most influential person in my life. 36 years after her death I still try to be like her. I relate to your poem and to your relationship with your aunt. Best wishes.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you Victor for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Your grandmother had an influence on you like my aunt had on mine. I often wonder what my influence will be on my family.
Blessings
Janet
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You are most welcome, Janet. I don?t think too often about what will be left behind to remind my children and grandchildren of me. I hope it?s positive. I just know it?s positive now for me to be with them. And that?s pretty good.
Comment from Gee
Yes ma'am many times people are totally misunderstood. I see this all the time. They are really nice but people always attack them for something.
I'm sorry for your loss.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Yes ma'am many times people are totally misunderstood. I see this all the time. They are really nice but people always attack them for something.
I'm sorry for your loss.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you Gee for your kind review and condolences.
Blessings
Janet
