Daily Goals
#Blessed3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a simple goal. He may want to eat another later. This reminds us we might want to make more advanced and society minded goals than this one. Though just eating a meal is a goal for the poor which we should help.
Congrats on getting third in the reviewing contest.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoent
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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This is a simple goal. He may want to eat another later. This reminds us we might want to make more advanced and society minded goals than this one. Though just eating a meal is a goal for the poor which we should help.
Congrats on getting third in the reviewing contest.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoent
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Dragonpoet -- thank you very much! You know the saying about "an apple a day". This might be the next iteration.
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You are most kindly welcome, HFP.
dp
Comment from JanPerry
Straight to the point. I love it!! I love the colour and the gorilla with his timely message. You have linked your page with the next poem about a goat. Isn't that a bit greedy? You are eating two bananas with two ideas. Sounds like a load of fun to me.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Straight to the point. I love it!! I love the colour and the gorilla with his timely message. You have linked your page with the next poem about a goat. Isn't that a bit greedy? You are eating two bananas with two ideas. Sounds like a load of fun to me.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Jan, when it comes to bananas I am always a greedy gorilla. I even have a bunch of organic bananas on my dining table just to remind myself every morning how vital they are to nutrition. Every one of my 20-something (or is it 30 now?) banana/gorilla poems are linked in a chain, in case you ever get really bored! The only time the latest one is unlinked is when it is a blind contest entry, and after the contest is over I edit it to link it.
Thanks for your kind review! Best, Harambe
Comment from tfawcus
One of life's simple pleasures! I like the way you have presented it. The small things of life are the ones in which we are truly blessed. In terms of impact, I would have found a single exclamation mark more telling than a line of seven. Just a personal opinion.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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One of life's simple pleasures! I like the way you have presented it. The small things of life are the ones in which we are truly blessed. In terms of impact, I would have found a single exclamation mark more telling than a line of seven. Just a personal opinion.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thanks Tfawcus! That is a good suggestion. I took it. Much appreciate your review.