One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Gloria ....
Love Atticus's shoes. Does he have another pair just like them?
A fun verse, and just the right question being asked, as sometimes it does seem that the sun is following us. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Love Atticus's shoes. Does he have another pair just like them?
A fun verse, and just the right question being asked, as sometimes it does seem that the sun is following us. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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LoL yes, he has another pair just like it.
Thank you very much, Gloria, you're very kind. I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars.
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Comment from Debra White
Hi Gypsy :)
I was just listening to that Pink Floyd song in the car a half hour ago!
I enjoyed your poem. It's sweet and lovely :) Love the photo of your grandson too - he looks like a real diamond! Diggin' his odd shoes :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Hi Gypsy :)
I was just listening to that Pink Floyd song in the car a half hour ago!
I enjoyed your poem. It's sweet and lovely :) Love the photo of your grandson too - he looks like a real diamond! Diggin' his odd shoes :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Yeah, he likes to wear mix and match shoes.
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- the picture of your grandson is precious!! A fine lad- inquisitive like his Grandmother? The sun symbolizing pure Consciousness reflecting from - an animating our subtle consciousness - shining bright- very nice
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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I like your poem- the picture of your grandson is precious!! A fine lad- inquisitive like his Grandmother? The sun symbolizing pure Consciousness reflecting from - an animating our subtle consciousness - shining bright- very nice
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Yes, he is a wonderful lad. AP, are you from Ireland?
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Comment from aryr
The picture was great, Gypsy. Atticus is a truly inquisitive little boy. I loved how he asked about the sun. This Lune poem was rather creative. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs especially for Atticus.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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The picture was great, Gypsy. Atticus is a truly inquisitive little boy. I loved how he asked about the sun. This Lune poem was rather creative. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs especially for Atticus.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Aryr. Atticus loves Pictures. He is used to us taking lots of them. I'll pass your hug on... LoL
Comment from lyenochka
That's sooo sweet! That he asks questions all day shows how intelligent he is and I'm glad his poet grandmother always has a great answer for him! Thanks for sharing the sunshiny poem!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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That's sooo sweet! That he asks questions all day shows how intelligent he is and I'm glad his poet grandmother always has a great answer for him! Thanks for sharing the sunshiny poem!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. I really appreciate it, Helen. Blessings.
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Comment from VJWild
Love this piece! And love how you split up the question into the two lines, makes the reader pause and start to think of the answer before we get to line three. Your poems are always enjoyable!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Love this piece! And love how you split up the question into the two lines, makes the reader pause and start to think of the answer before we get to line three. Your poems are always enjoyable!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. I really appreciate it.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This sounds just like a young child would ask mom. You did a great job with your lune, Gypsy. The syllable count is correct per line, the color scheme works, and the picture is adorable. Yes, Atticus is inquisitive.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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This sounds just like a young child would ask mom. You did a great job with your lune, Gypsy. The syllable count is correct per line, the color scheme works, and the picture is adorable. Yes, Atticus is inquisitive.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. I really appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
What a cute little boy! Our youngest is five, just starting school, every inch a boy, but such a sweet little boy, but he's growing up so fast, and I suspect he's the last grandchild, he's particularly close to Elaine, and we looked after him three days a week, but now, only after school. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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What a cute little boy! Our youngest is five, just starting school, every inch a boy, but such a sweet little boy, but he's growing up so fast, and I suspect he's the last grandchild, he's particularly close to Elaine, and we looked after him three days a week, but now, only after school. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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My grandson is 4 yrs old. I take care of him daily.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. I really appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your grandson looks like the shining star of your poem. The sun brings sunshine for every little boy and girl so they can play outside without the umbrella. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Your grandson looks like the shining star of your poem. The sun brings sunshine for every little boy and girl so they can play outside without the umbrella. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. I really appreciate it.
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