Love at First Sight
A love that made a way.22 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Love at First Sight', is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. With craft and skill. This talented poet has told it as it is.
Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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'Love at First Sight', is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. With craft and skill. This talented poet has told it as it is.
Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading.
Excited to celebrate our 25th year. We are making plans for ourselves in the near future. I think our adult children are settled. 🙏
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25 years gives you plenty to celebrate. If you have settled adult children then you're blessed.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This was a charming and heartwarming love poem.
What makes this even more beautiful is that the love shines in the words.
Best wishes
Good luck in the contest
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This was a charming and heartwarming love poem.
What makes this even more beautiful is that the love shines in the words.
Best wishes
Good luck in the contest
Mary
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reviewing
We are definitely more in love than ever. We have some new dreams waiting for us. So here is too another 25
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Love at First Sight, seems to be a nod to the celebration of a silver anniversary. Always nice to know one's 'sight' causes more than a scoff. : )
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This poem, Love at First Sight, seems to be a nod to the celebration of a silver anniversary. Always nice to know one's 'sight' causes more than a scoff. : )
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you
This made me laugh out loud. The scoff at first sight. I can happen, but is often not the real thing.
We just got blessed. I needed his person and character and he needed mine.
People will often ask me: "why Mike."
I usually say: "He took the time to read my book". We are both avid readers so this is a fitting statement for our journey together.
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your very romantic poem. What a lovely photo and good presentation. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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I really enjoyed reading your very romantic poem. What a lovely photo and good presentation. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading.
I can hardly believe we have been together for 25 years. Every day a feeling of thankfulness.
Comment from MissMerri
This is an excellent love poem. I like the rhymes, so natural and the whole poem flows so naturally and tells a sweet story. I'm sure this will do very well in the Love contest. You've followed the rules perfectly.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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This is an excellent love poem. I like the rhymes, so natural and the whole poem flows so naturally and tells a sweet story. I'm sure this will do very well in the Love contest. You've followed the rules perfectly.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you,
Twenty five years on May 3, feels like I should celebrate it now. ..,or should I say let?s start now.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-Congratulations on the 25 years;
that is a big milestone.
-A well written poem with a good topic,
description, and rhyme.
-You tell a good story of your
relationship and how it developed
to saying "I do!"
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Congratulations on the 25 years;
that is a big milestone.
-A well written poem with a good topic,
description, and rhyme.
-You tell a good story of your
relationship and how it developed
to saying "I do!"
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading.
In reading the see reviews, each one just deepens my thankfulness for our lives together.
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You are very welcome, and I am glad to hear they made you feel that way.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A wonderful poem about marriage and loving one another. It's a nice way to spend Valentine's Day, too. Happy many more years. Meaningful poem.
Congratulations!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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A wonderful poem about marriage and loving one another. It's a nice way to spend Valentine's Day, too. Happy many more years. Meaningful poem.
Congratulations!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading
We have had a good go to this point. I can still catch my breath, when I see him. I wish for more years just for us.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful photo - your happiness shines through. Lovely words in your short poem and I hope too that your love and happiness continues for another twenty-five years. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Beautiful photo - your happiness shines through. Lovely words in your short poem and I hope too that your love and happiness continues for another twenty-five years. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thanks for reading
I think even when are upset at each other, the love is still bright. We have raised 3 kids together ( his stepchildren). We had a close blended family.
Now we have 9 grandchildren and another little girl on the way.
We are now starting to think of what we want for just us. Even if we never get there- we are hoping for a few dreams and years to have a little peace.
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Aaahhh, I absolutely LOVE this. My husband and I shared something similar. Thank you for sharing such a personal poem. Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Aaahhh, I absolutely LOVE this. My husband and I shared something similar. Thank you for sharing such a personal poem. Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading
I am definitely looking forward to more years together. This seems like a good year to start our own adventures again. We have a large family on both sides. I am starting to dream again.
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It's never too late!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Love writing prompt contest. It's very romantic. The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the Love writing prompt contest. It's very romantic. The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading
I grew up in an abusive family and did not know how to be loved. My husband has given so much to me and my children? and lol, now our 10 grandchildren. We are never far apart, despite our very independent natures.
