Fiery Eyes
Fire 5.7.58 total reviews
Comment from Nottoway
Excellent. A great description of that fire one recognizes in another. One never knows when that flame may come, but it can bring such joy-fleeting or forever!
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Excellent. A great description of that fire one recognizes in another. One never knows when that flame may come, but it can bring such joy-fleeting or forever!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The eye is on fire; it is burning, perhaps after using the wrong solution to cure the cause. When a person is in the dust the eye gets irritated and sets it on fire with redness.
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The eye is on fire; it is burning, perhaps after using the wrong solution to cure the cause. When a person is in the dust the eye gets irritated and sets it on fire with redness.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 fire writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice imagery and presentation.
I love the fire theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 fire writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice imagery and presentation.
I love the fire theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great response to the prompt. There is a progression from fire to boil to alight that moves the poem and the emotions in the poem forward to a burning end.
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Great response to the prompt. There is a progression from fire to boil to alight that moves the poem and the emotions in the poem forward to a burning end.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love the artwork you added to this poem. It is certainly appropriate for the subject of the writing. This is a well-written poem and should do well in the contest. I wish you all the luck in the world.
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I love the artwork you added to this poem. It is certainly appropriate for the subject of the writing. This is a well-written poem and should do well in the contest. I wish you all the luck in the world.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
Comment from juliaSjames
I like this creative and passionate love poem on the theme of fire. You sustain the metaphor with ease.
Maybe I would have written "aflame" in the last line. But that's a personal preference.
In the second line there's a typo
" bring" should be "brings"
Good luck in this fun prompt
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
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I like this creative and passionate love poem on the theme of fire. You sustain the metaphor with ease.
Maybe I would have written "aflame" in the last line. But that's a personal preference.
In the second line there's a typo
" bring" should be "brings"
Good luck in this fun prompt
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
Comment from AdaJulie
Awwww this is steamy hot for a groundhog day. Great creative mind going on here. Nice work and may you keep up the great talent. Have a great day, shadows or not.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Awwww this is steamy hot for a groundhog day. Great creative mind going on here. Nice work and may you keep up the great talent. Have a great day, shadows or not.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your review. I have never been a big believer/understander of groundhog day. Not a bad movie though :).
Comment from Terry Broxson
The rules said to be creative, and you have been. All three lines have some reference to fire. Fire in the eyes, emotions boiling, and setting you alight. That is good stuff. It should do well in the contest, good luck.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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The rules said to be creative, and you have been. All three lines have some reference to fire. Fire in the eyes, emotions boiling, and setting you alight. That is good stuff. It should do well in the contest, good luck.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thanks for a very positive review. Glad you enjoyed.
