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I trust you, so ...14 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Wendy, Well done, well said. Good 3-5-7 format. I especially liked:
I will follow you
Into my rich and full life
(This could be said for a guide dog, or any positive roll model--both worth their weight in gold.)
Well chosen artwork. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Hello Wendy, Well done, well said. Good 3-5-7 format. I especially liked:
I will follow you
Into my rich and full life
(This could be said for a guide dog, or any positive roll model--both worth their weight in gold.)
Well chosen artwork. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and good wishes. I appreciate both.
Wendy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
There is so much in this tiny poem. It is rich in information, hope and trust. It shows clearly the positive values of guide dogs. I believe you have a good candidate here for the 3-5-7 Writing Prompt contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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There is so much in this tiny poem. It is rich in information, hope and trust. It shows clearly the positive values of guide dogs. I believe you have a good candidate here for the 3-5-7 Writing Prompt contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Katherine - such a lovely review, and thank you for the good wishes (it came third).
Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-5-7 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-7 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy for your positive and encouraging words and good wishes. All appreciated very much.
Wendy
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Yes, there are several interpretations that come to mind for this piece--which makes it a fine and interesting poem. I ike the e sugested by the photo, simplybecause ti exhibits such faith in the ability to overcome adversity.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Yes, there are several interpretations that come to mind for this piece--which makes it a fine and interesting poem. I ike the e sugested by the photo, simplybecause ti exhibits such faith in the ability to overcome adversity.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, Nancy, for reviewing, and for your thoughts. I appreciate it a lot.
Wendy
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your fifteen syllables in this expressive, moving piece about trust--full, unwavering trust. One doesn't have to be blind to realize that no one can "SEE" the future. We must be led. To me the poem is deeply spiritual.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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You have made excellent use of your fifteen syllables in this expressive, moving piece about trust--full, unwavering trust. One doesn't have to be blind to realize that no one can "SEE" the future. We must be led. To me the poem is deeply spiritual.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you for a super review. Yes, the spiritual element was the real significance of my words. We can't see the future but we can trust the One who leads and guides us, and His life within is rich and full. I am so pleased you got it.
Wendy
Comment from jaded831
It amazes me that dogs can be trained to do everything, they can actually be smarter than people. My dog was smart and made my life special, your poem brought out the special relationship between a blind person and their dog.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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It amazes me that dogs can be trained to do everything, they can actually be smarter than people. My dog was smart and made my life special, your poem brought out the special relationship between a blind person and their dog.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your lovely review! Appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This poem touches more than just the eyes. I love dogs that help the blind. They are very smart and also very protective. Like the words in your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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This poem touches more than just the eyes. I love dogs that help the blind. They are very smart and also very protective. Like the words in your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your encouraging words and good wishes. Both are greatly appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved it! And the picture is perfect for the poem. But it can also be a spiritual poem, addressing God to lead us on because a rich and full life is what He wants for us. Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Loved it! And the picture is perfect for the poem. But it can also be a spiritual poem, addressing God to lead us on because a rich and full life is what He wants for us. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you. Yes, exactly, that is what I hoped readers would think of. We may be blind as to what lies ahead, but we can trust Him with each step of the way. Many thanks for your perceptive review, and for the good wishes.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi there! I really enjoyed reading your verse. It is wonderfully written and a thoroughly enjoyable poem. Please forgive me for not saying more. I had injections in each hand yesterday and find it difficult to type. Great job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Hi there! I really enjoyed reading your verse. It is wonderfully written and a thoroughly enjoyable poem. Please forgive me for not saying more. I had injections in each hand yesterday and find it difficult to type. Great job.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Oh thank you so much for reviewing, especially in view of the pain you must be in! Hope your hands will be better soon, with quick healing.
Comment from lancellot
This is a very nice poem. I think it goes perfectly with the picture. It almost seems as the photo is what inspired the pom. I think the theme is an important one. Read in conjunction with the presentation it makes perfect sense.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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This is a very nice poem. I think it goes perfectly with the picture. It almost seems as the photo is what inspired the pom. I think the theme is an important one. Read in conjunction with the presentation it makes perfect sense.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for reviewing and thinking about it. Appreciated.
