Monsters
They lurk everywhere.4 total reviews
Comment from Rebel Jim
NOT Don't EVER let me meet this fool, 'cause I'd Kill him...
But straight out ... I'd make him SUFFER!...
Keep him barely alive for a full week.... And NOT kill him....
OOPS!.. A full moon is comin' around I might get kinda nasty!
Wanna play?!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
NOT Don't EVER let me meet this fool, 'cause I'd Kill him...
But straight out ... I'd make him SUFFER!...
Keep him barely alive for a full week.... And NOT kill him....
OOPS!.. A full moon is comin' around I might get kinda nasty!
Wanna play?!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Ciao Rebel Jim!
Hope you are well.. nice to see you posting!
Sadly there are so many dogs living this same drama everyday.
I would give him a taste of his own medicine .. on a chain out in the heat , cold and throw some scrapes in the dirt.
But I believe in karma and like I said in my closing verse , he will pay for his crime / his cruelty.
Take care
and behave ! ( biggrin)
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Your idea is what I was thinking!
If you don't do it... I WILL!!
As far as behaving... Do I have to?!
Comment from Patty Palmer
You're totally right that this dog's master was a monster. I don't know how people can be so cruel to an animal like this. That poor dog never knew a kind word or gesture. I hope that man does rot in hell. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
You're totally right that this dog's master was a monster. I don't know how people can be so cruel to an animal like this. That poor dog never knew a kind word or gesture. I hope that man does rot in hell. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for review my entry.
Unfortunately, there are dozens of dogs that live this same drama everyday.
chained to a pole , abused .
Then there are all the animals exploited for labour purposes like donkeys .. and once they are old or suffer an injury , they are quickly discarded.
There is a lot of evil in this world .
Keep safe!
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Franca. Your FreeVerse was extremely well written and so moving. You portrayed him as the monster he is... hope this was all fiction. Great job!! Hope you are doing well!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
Hello Franca. Your FreeVerse was extremely well written and so moving. You portrayed him as the monster he is... hope this was all fiction. Great job!! Hope you are doing well!!
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Ciao Sugarray ,
unfortunately stories like this one are a constant reality.
You tube is full of them ..
Google :
Hope for Paws..
it?s an American rescue team that saves everyday dogs and cats that have been dumped on the streets.
It?s deplorable and heartbreaking.
Luckily most rescued animal a relocated in new happy forever homes.
Take care!
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem made me so angry and sad at the terrible treatment this specific dog suffered at the hands of that specific man... unfortunately this awful scenario happens far too often, carried out by the monsters amongst us.
Correction in last stanza:
Stay assure folks that
should be
Stay assured, folks, that
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
Your poem made me so angry and sad at the terrible treatment this specific dog suffered at the hands of that specific man... unfortunately this awful scenario happens far too often, carried out by the monsters amongst us.
Correction in last stanza:
Stay assure folks that
should be
Stay assured, folks, that
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank for the helpful feedback. I will edit!
Yes is upsets me too ..
everyday dogs and cats are abused by their owners , the first that should love them.
So much suffering .. some people are just pure evil.
Keep safe!