The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Rushing to Dawn"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
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Comment from Adri7enne
"The crowd parted a little as he RUN (RAN) up to Dawn's ..." Oh, that doesn't sound like a friendly party. I didn't realize Dryads could be so tough. I always pictured them as small winged creatures. Guess it depends on whose imagination is creating them uh? You've got a real violent streak there, my old friend. I enjoyed Bob's humiliation. He's a big guy able to take a bit of roughing up. Lol! Next!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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"The crowd parted a little as he RUN (RAN) up to Dawn's ..." Oh, that doesn't sound like a friendly party. I didn't realize Dryads could be so tough. I always pictured them as small winged creatures. Guess it depends on whose imagination is creating them uh? You've got a real violent streak there, my old friend. I enjoyed Bob's humiliation. He's a big guy able to take a bit of roughing up. Lol! Next!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Oops. Thanks for the spag. I imagine that tree dryads would reflect the tree itself. I suspect these might be Oak dryads. Thanks for the review
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great chapter. I will have to go back and catch up. I'm presuming this is a place on earth and Bob and Amanda are humans? Interesting and imaginative. I leave this chapter wanting more. I will have to revisit.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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This is a great chapter. I will have to go back and catch up. I'm presuming this is a place on earth and Bob and Amanda are humans? Interesting and imaginative. I leave this chapter wanting more. I will have to revisit.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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You're very kind, thank you. Glad you liked it
Comment from papa55mike
You have quite an array of rich characters in which to work with, in this book. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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You have quite an array of rich characters in which to work with, in this book. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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You're very kind, thank you. Glad you liked it