My Mask
15 Word Picture Poem contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
love poems about masks - we all wear them in some way....
love that first line - really makes the reader wonder who they're reading
good entry and good luck in the contest!
thank you for sharing :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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love poems about masks - we all wear them in some way....
love that first line - really makes the reader wonder who they're reading
good entry and good luck in the contest!
thank you for sharing :)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the awesome review, Shelley. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Love both the words and th photo. Was the latter yours? Good luck in the vote. Now what in the heck have I more to say to qualify this dorky rule of 150 characters?
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Love both the words and th photo. Was the latter yours? Good luck in the vote. Now what in the heck have I more to say to qualify this dorky rule of 150 characters?
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Wow, thank you for the awesome review and big sixer, Tom. I was beginning to think that no one on here had the smarts to figure out what I was actually saying. Lol. It took forever just to get my second review. Ha.
No, the killer picture is just something I found through a Google Image search. I wish I had a fraction of this talent. I like to paint and create digital art but I can't come close to this.
Yeah, that 150 character rule is a bit ridiculous.
I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again and have a great day.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good poem for the writing prompt. Like the idea of masquerade masks. I'm not sure how masks "in ruse upon." If the intend is to make these words mean intrude then I think it is a beautiful image of the image intruding on poetry's innocence or perhaps in ruse with poetry's innocence.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Good poem for the writing prompt. Like the idea of masquerade masks. I'm not sure how masks "in ruse upon." If the intend is to make these words mean intrude then I think it is a beautiful image of the image intruding on poetry's innocence or perhaps in ruse with poetry's innocence.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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It's just that a lot of folks believe that everything they read is absolute truth on here. We can hide under any persona's mask we choose for the day. Maybe innocence is the exact word I'm looking for here. Who knows? I was a little tipsy when I wrote it. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Theodore. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks your feeling in shade of ruse, truth is guarded in poetic innocence; a good confession in today's state of living; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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This poem speaks your feeling in shade of ruse, truth is guarded in poetic innocence; a good confession in today's state of living; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Al. I'm glad you liked the piece.
