Split
a fifteen-word poem8 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
the first, second, and fourth lines are killer!
the third line, maybe try: inside <-> outside ?
the last line is interesting
just some thoughts! good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing! :)
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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the first, second, and fourth lines are killer!
the third line, maybe try: inside <-> outside ?
the last line is interesting
just some thoughts! good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing! :)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Shelley
Comment from Sugarray77
I commend you on writing an excellent verse for this prompt. The philosophical theme resonates with all of us who perceive that we view things from different perspectives and also are judged by others who view things differently too. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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I commend you on writing an excellent verse for this prompt. The philosophical theme resonates with all of us who perceive that we view things from different perspectives and also are judged by others who view things differently too. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Melissa
Comment from jaded831
Very deep and makes me think about myself and other people. We wear many different faces people are complex. I stopped trying to figure others,I have enough trouble figuring out myself.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Very deep and makes me think about myself and other people. We wear many different faces people are complex. I stopped trying to figure others,I have enough trouble figuring out myself.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Jaded, for giving this a look.
Comment from Wendy G
You are absolutely right - and you have created a thoughtful (and thought-provoking) poem in just a few words. It is what we all struggle with to an extent in terms of our self-identity and self-value, trying to find some sort of concordance. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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You are absolutely right - and you have created a thoughtful (and thought-provoking) poem in just a few words. It is what we all struggle with to an extent in terms of our self-identity and self-value, trying to find some sort of concordance. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A philosophical write as we are often judged with suspicion and too much is expected of us at times, you managed to say it all in these few words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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A philosophical write as we are often judged with suspicion and too much is expected of us at times, you managed to say it all in these few words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have defined with justifications the picture; a face is the true index of mind; a split of personality reflexes the face; as we are judged we are that, still others expect and split our personality in plethora of suspicious belongings; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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You have defined with justifications the picture; a face is the true index of mind; a split of personality reflexes the face; as we are judged we are that, still others expect and split our personality in plethora of suspicious belongings; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, you fit a lot in these 15 words. Loved your artwork - fits perfectly here.
It's so true - how we perceive ourselves and how others see us. Lots of wisdom here.
Good imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Oh, you fit a lot in these 15 words. Loved your artwork - fits perfectly here.
It's so true - how we perceive ourselves and how others see us. Lots of wisdom here.
Good imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thanks, EM
Comment from JPGeo
Great interpretation. So the artist expresses themself then we come along and judge. Every post, every tweet, every outfit we wear subjects us to scrutiny. Even my review of your poem works both ways. You judge me, I judge you.
So, you have me thinking about your 15 words. That makes this entry a success
Nice Job.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Great interpretation. So the artist expresses themself then we come along and judge. Every post, every tweet, every outfit we wear subjects us to scrutiny. Even my review of your poem works both ways. You judge me, I judge you.
So, you have me thinking about your 15 words. That makes this entry a success
Nice Job.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you, John
