We Chose Each Other
We Leaned Into Love and43 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
We Chose Each Other
by Artasylum
I love your presentation and imagery. Nice metaphor of a relationship meeting many challenges becomes a diamond. It's an excellent entry for the Valentine Poem contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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We Chose Each Other
by Artasylum
I love your presentation and imagery. Nice metaphor of a relationship meeting many challenges becomes a diamond. It's an excellent entry for the Valentine Poem contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Hey Gypsy... Thanks for reading and your spot on review... yours, diana
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You're welcome, Diana
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise love poem couldn't say anything more deeply meaningful and moving if you'd written ten times this much. The forging of a diamond over time says it all!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Your ultra-concise love poem couldn't say anything more deeply meaningful and moving if you'd written ten times this much. The forging of a diamond over time says it all!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your lovely review... also, thanks so much for your stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from Janet Foor
Great artwork and lovely love poem. Marriages that last a lifetime do have to survive the struggles that sometimes take us through fires but oh the rewards.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Great artwork and lovely love poem. Marriages that last a lifetime do have to survive the struggles that sometimes take us through fires but oh the rewards.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Say Amen... thanks for your stellar review... yours, diana
Comment from mermaids
Your words come forth as real and straight from the heart. "Struggled through the fires" is a perfect line that well described life and how fires will pop up in marriage. Excellent poem for Valentine's Day.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Your words come forth as real and straight from the heart. "Struggled through the fires" is a perfect line that well described life and how fires will pop up in marriage. Excellent poem for Valentine's Day.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much mermaid - singular...
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a short poem the says a lot about lasting love. It takes you through both good and bad times and perseveres.
The picture is very romantic and fits the words well.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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This is a short poem the says a lot about lasting love. It takes you through both good and bad times and perseveres.
The picture is very romantic and fits the words well.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Hey dragon... thanks so much for your wonderful words and stellar review. yours, di
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My pleasure, Diane.
Joan
Comment from royowen
The only folk I really write love poems for are my wife, grands and kids, but the majority are love poems to the author of my faith, but I'm not into writing love pens as such. And a love poem to your partner in the journey of life, is most permissible, Beautifully written Di, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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The only folk I really write love poems for are my wife, grands and kids, but the majority are love poems to the author of my faith, but I'm not into writing love pens as such. And a love poem to your partner in the journey of life, is most permissible, Beautifully written Di, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Hey Roy... I always enjoy your love poems to God, your wife, your children and to your grandchildren... In life, I know that when I die, I will ask myself what has mattered most to me, (I do that now and I always keep that question in my pocket), I know my answer is; My Beloved God, Family, Friends, and even the Strangers that I have met along life's trail that have affected me positively... That is what I will think of when I take my last breaths and smile goodbye. But I ramble...
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Me too, after all we simply take what gives us and give to other and back to, that?s the natural, some strive in areas that belong to others. Well done.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Artasylum a terrific Tuesday to you, I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing your Valentine poem entry. It was a nicely written poem. Good luck in the contest and congrats on 26years. Diamonds are forever.
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Hello Artasylum a terrific Tuesday to you, I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing your Valentine poem entry. It was a nicely written poem. Good luck in the contest and congrats on 26years. Diamonds are forever.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry. I loved reading it. Your words are well chosen and paint a great picture. yes, it takes extreme heat and pressure to form diamonds. I like the comparison of that process to love's up and downs with diamonds as the end result.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry. I loved reading it. Your words are well chosen and paint a great picture. yes, it takes extreme heat and pressure to form diamonds. I like the comparison of that process to love's up and downs with diamonds as the end result.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks as always Pam... always appreciated. yours, di
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This is JAN
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Okay so sorry... JAN it shall be... please forgive my ignorance... yours, di... looking forward.
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No worries. 😊❤️
Comment from JessicaAshley
Oh, this is perfect! Such a powerful, beautiful picture painted in such few words. I pray one day I can have a love like this of my own. It definitely made my heart smile. Thank you for sharing!
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Oh, this is perfect! Such a powerful, beautiful picture painted in such few words. I pray one day I can have a love like this of my own. It definitely made my heart smile. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Art Asylum, you've penned a beautiful and heartfelt valentine poem. It's a poem that will be well received. I especially liked:
and we forged a diamond
(May it always shine.)
This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
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Hello Art Asylum, you've penned a beautiful and heartfelt valentine poem. It's a poem that will be well received. I especially liked:
and we forged a diamond
(May it always shine.)
This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
