"The Gift of Life."
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5 total reviews
Comment from Eunice Amero
This was really a short story and awful. You had a lot of information in it. Very sad. The accident was terrible. It put sadness in my heart. Good job and good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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This was really a short story and awful. You had a lot of information in it. Very sad. The accident was terrible. It put sadness in my heart. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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But thanks for coming along for this horrible ride Eunice.
And, Chapter Number Three?
Yes, is now completed.
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Ok you're welcome
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You are welcome
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Doctor Ricky, you've written another masterpiece. I enjoy how descriptive you are. This one hurt my heart for you. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Doctor Ricky, you've written another masterpiece. I enjoy how descriptive you are. This one hurt my heart for you. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Why thank you very much for coming along for this nightmare into the past Heather.
And Chapter Number Three?
Yes, is now completed.
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Comment from Frank Jauregui
Excellent story given in poetic form. I like the way the fluorescent green of your text, lights up against the black background. It reminds me of a heart monitor at a hospital, how it goes steadily up and down, but every once in a while, jumps suddenly or threatens to go flat. The words of your poem have the same effect on the reader. I can't wait to read part three.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Excellent story given in poetic form. I like the way the fluorescent green of your text, lights up against the black background. It reminds me of a heart monitor at a hospital, how it goes steadily up and down, but every once in a while, jumps suddenly or threatens to go flat. The words of your poem have the same effect on the reader. I can't wait to read part three.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks and I'm sorry to drag you into this but in the end you will realize why Frank.
And Chapter Number Three?
Yes, is now completed.
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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a traumatic event, which etched March 23, 2003 as the date the protagonist hates in his life.
The work highlights several activities that culminated in an accident that took the life of Jason; the struggle to get Jason detached from the car and how like a double strike of Satan, the event rendered the protagonist metaphorically dead.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of traumatic anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a traumatic event, which etched March 23, 2003 as the date the protagonist hates in his life.
The work highlights several activities that culminated in an accident that took the life of Jason; the struggle to get Jason detached from the car and how like a double strike of Satan, the event rendered the protagonist metaphorically dead.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of traumatic anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thanks Lloyd.
And yes, there will be two more chapters complete this.
Doctor Ricky.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
This is a well-written, horrifying and poignant account of your trauma that has captured your heart and mind so long concerning the car wreck. It is the most direct description of what happened that I have read from you. So sorry. I know. It is difficult for some traumas to be integrated into one's life. Well-done from a artistry standpoint.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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This is a well-written, horrifying and poignant account of your trauma that has captured your heart and mind so long concerning the car wreck. It is the most direct description of what happened that I have read from you. So sorry. I know. It is difficult for some traumas to be integrated into one's life. Well-done from a artistry standpoint.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thanks Theodore.
And, there will actually be two more chapters.
Before this is completed.
And, of course the next one with what goes on in the hospital
Finally, followed with the final and last chapter.
"Entrance into Heaven"
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And, to finally make what's happening change from negative to positive.
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