Where do lost souls go
Wandering souls, where do they graze2 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem which is in perfect syllable count for the contest. I like the internal slant rhyme in line two, I also like that lines 1&3 rhyme. Beautifully presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem which is in perfect syllable count for the contest. I like the internal slant rhyme in line two, I also like that lines 1&3 rhyme. Beautifully presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you Debra :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
No one can answer this question and we keep on wondering what happens to souls, but spirits live on after death as they are remembered by loved ones, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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No one can answer this question and we keep on wondering what happens to souls, but spirits live on after death as they are remembered by loved ones, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Who knows right? I guess all will be revealed to us one day ... Thank you Dolly:)
