Changing Time
5-7-9 contest9 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Moonlight is a symbol of one's innermost self. It is under the blue moonlight that people discover who they truly are and their hidden desires. It is a start of a new day.
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Moonlight is a symbol of one's innermost self. It is under the blue moonlight that people discover who they truly are and their hidden desires. It is a start of a new day.
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery of setting sun.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery of setting sun.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
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Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful presentation for your thoughts. A very well written 5-7-9, which is thought-provoking as well. I enjoyed the idea of day and night intersecting like this. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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A beautiful presentation for your thoughts. A very well written 5-7-9, which is thought-provoking as well. I enjoyed the idea of day and night intersecting like this. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is in perfect syllable count for the contest and the presentation is stunning! Nice use of alliteration in line one.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is in perfect syllable count for the contest and the presentation is stunning! Nice use of alliteration in line one.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
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Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Mystery Writer, I enjoyed reading your glowing verse and think the use of the line... Intersecting time line... was clever and helped set up the final thought in line three. Well done!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Hello Mystery Writer, I enjoyed reading your glowing verse and think the use of the line... Intersecting time line... was clever and helped set up the final thought in line three. Well done!!
Melissa
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Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good poem for the contest. You juxtapose the setting sun and the moon which shows the way to a new day and the rising sun. The middle line is more philosophical and deals with the concept of time. Well done.
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Good poem for the contest. You juxtapose the setting sun and the moon which shows the way to a new day and the rising sun. The middle line is more philosophical and deals with the concept of time. Well done.
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes the setting sun and the moonlight.
-I like the idea in the second line, and the concluding line has
a positive message about the new day.
-A good entry; good luck!!
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes the setting sun and the moonlight.
-I like the idea in the second line, and the concluding line has
a positive message about the new day.
-A good entry; good luck!!
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Comment from Heather Burroughs
Beautiful poem. The image and imagery are beautiful! Thank you for sharing your work with us. Good luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you.
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Beautiful poem. The image and imagery are beautiful! Thank you for sharing your work with us. Good luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you.
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a beautiful poem that streams well. I loved it. The picture choice is great--I can see the intersecting time line! And it's right on the money with syllabication.
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This is a beautiful poem that streams well. I loved it. The picture choice is great--I can see the intersecting time line! And it's right on the money with syllabication.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
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