Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Pookie,

This is a nice and simple poem about the grace of God and our positive spirits. As long as we remember that God is in charge, we should always have the hope to keep moving forward. Thanks!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022

You are welcome. Thanks for reading it.

Comment from Heather Burroughs

Excellent

I love your poem of hope. There are always brighter days ahead. Your faith exudes from this piece. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you and your loved ones.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022

Thanks.

Comment from Gee

Excellent

Oh, a nice entry into the 5-7-9 poem competition.
A great message. I know it's hard to convey a message with so few words.
I think you did great.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Gee

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022

Thanks.