The black bear
I turned around to see three bear Cubs2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. I make me wonder if the bears even notice the person in this poem (if it were real). I can see them saying (if bears could talk). Why is that person throwing berries at us.
I thought the poem was well crafted and flowed nicely.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Very nice. I make me wonder if the bears even notice the person in this poem (if it were real). I can see them saying (if bears could talk). Why is that person throwing berries at us.
I thought the poem was well crafted and flowed nicely.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you
Comment from MissMerri
I enjoyed this little poem and think you've done a good job talking about the animal, but for the life of me, I couldn't find the word "animal" in your poem anywhere. Am I simply missing it? I did see the other two required words. You have nice rhymes and a pleasant meter and the story is great. I wish you good luck in the contest. MM
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed this little poem and think you've done a good job talking about the animal, but for the life of me, I couldn't find the word "animal" in your poem anywhere. Am I simply missing it? I did see the other two required words. You have nice rhymes and a pleasant meter and the story is great. I wish you good luck in the contest. MM
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you animal is there now I actually missed it lol and I was still working on it.