How I Spent My Thursday Nights
My very favorite television show to this day18 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
That certainly does reflect the show Daniel Boon and friends. Missed the opportunity to drop a work to contend that speaks of Roy, Gene, Cisco and Pancho, Bill Hickock, Lawman, Shane and a battery of others. Don't know your age but my childhood was filled with so many Western men idolized by guns with faux pas ivory grips.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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That certainly does reflect the show Daniel Boon and friends. Missed the opportunity to drop a work to contend that speaks of Roy, Gene, Cisco and Pancho, Bill Hickock, Lawman, Shane and a battery of others. Don't know your age but my childhood was filled with so many Western men idolized by guns with faux pas ivory grips.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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I'm 60. The contest said to only talk about one show. I almost got disqualified because I mentioned Fess Played Davy Crockett. I appreciate you going back and looking at my other stuff.
Comment from Kayte Ray
Nicely done. This had great flow and rhythm and I love the story that you give me as the reader. You have presented a wonderful picture here that just makes me smile.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Nicely done. This had great flow and rhythm and I love the story that you give me as the reader. You have presented a wonderful picture here that just makes me smile.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from RGstar
A nice story poem here Earl. I know of Daniel Boone, but being on the other side of the Atlantic, I am not familiar with The TV programme. Your very well grafted couplets though explained in detail the kind of show, and I like everyone who read this, realise the aura and setting.
Good luck with the entry...very good couplets...nice rhythm.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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A nice story poem here Earl. I know of Daniel Boone, but being on the other side of the Atlantic, I am not familiar with The TV programme. Your very well grafted couplets though explained in detail the kind of show, and I like everyone who read this, realise the aura and setting.
Good luck with the entry...very good couplets...nice rhythm.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you Very much RGstar, I took second place. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Artasylum
I am indirectly related to Daniel Boone... that is my surname and I have checked out our lineage... Fess Parker was a man's man when I was little my dad watched every week just as you did... Thanks so much for bringing back the memories... di
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I am indirectly related to Daniel Boone... that is my surname and I have checked out our lineage... Fess Parker was a man's man when I was little my dad watched every week just as you did... Thanks so much for bringing back the memories... di
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you Very much, I took second place. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear writer,
Now I am impressed. I have read the other entries and while they all met the requirements they just didn't thrill me. Your poem did. It had a great rhyme scheme. It flowed very well. Your wording was creative. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Dear writer,
Now I am impressed. I have read the other entries and while they all met the requirements they just didn't thrill me. Your poem did. It had a great rhyme scheme. It flowed very well. Your wording was creative. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you Very much Darlene, I took second place. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Dear Earl,
I am glad to hear you got second place. I would be having a rant if you hadn't LOL. Have a good night.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. The rhyming
in this poem is excellent! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is great and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. The rhyming
in this poem is excellent! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is great and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you Very much, I took second place. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I remember those days when Daniel Boone was on television. Like your poem. Even those old shows are great to watch again sometimes. Daniel Boone was an American pioneer and frontiersman whose exploits made him one of the first folk heroes of the United States.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I remember those days when Daniel Boone was on television. Like your poem. Even those old shows are great to watch again sometimes. Daniel Boone was an American pioneer and frontiersman whose exploits made him one of the first folk heroes of the United States.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you Very much, I took second place. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Wendy G
A cleverly written poem which meets the requirements of the contest. Your poem was smooth, with good rhyme and metre, and interesting. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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A cleverly written poem which meets the requirements of the contest. Your poem was smooth, with good rhyme and metre, and interesting. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you Very much Wendy, I took second place. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Boogienights
I like westerns too, but I don't remember watching Daniel Boone. I liked Gunsmoke, which I still watch in reruns. Your poem is well written and interesting, thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I like westerns too, but I don't remember watching Daniel Boone. I liked Gunsmoke, which I still watch in reruns. Your poem is well written and interesting, thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you Very much, I took second place. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I too love western movies, this is a very good poem. One very
small suggestion. The word "in" in the last line of the nineth
stanza. I believe that line would flow better if you said "into"
trouble. This is not a criticism of your work, just a wee suggestion. Best wishes, my friend.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I too love western movies, this is a very good poem. One very
small suggestion. The word "in" in the last line of the nineth
stanza. I believe that line would flow better if you said "into"
trouble. This is not a criticism of your work, just a wee suggestion. Best wishes, my friend.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you Very much Willie, I took second place. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem. I changed it into, you were right.
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Congrats, buddy
