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Campfire

Ignites passion and desire

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Comment from harmony13
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A great 1-6-1 syllable count poem! The first two lines flow and connect well. The last line says it all! Yet left me pondering! The artwork is
awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2022

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Very romantic words and the image is also inviting. I can see this type of activity happening on an evening when there are no bugs swarming around. But thank goodness, the smoke will keep them away.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022

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Comment from Gee
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oh this is a nice entry into the 1-6-1 poetry competition.
romantic yet subtle.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing with us
Good Luck
Gee

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile with this write as you made me think of something a little naught is going on here as lovers embark on a journey of love in the dark! He he he, much enjoyed

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022

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    Lol thanks Dolly
Comment from eliz100
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You have met the syllable count for this contest. The picture you chose and the words you chose make a powerful statement. You described passion in a way that anyone could read it. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022

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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I liked the full set of line end rhymes in this short poem, and the colours you used both for the text and in the image did indeed invoke warmth and desire.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2022

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Comment from John Ciarmello
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I love campfires, this particular one is on the beach which I love that much more. Great choice of words here. the starting of the fire, the warmth, and then the peace. Loved it

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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Comment from LisaMay
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Oh how I do enjoy being beside a fire, admiring those flickering flames that can ignite 'warm desire' when with a companion. It's a primeval connection that you have expressed well in such a limited form.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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Comment from papa55mike
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I've read several of these entries today and I like this one. Fires do create a special atmosphere. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three very good rhymes
and a theme most will love in these cold January days.
Well done.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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    Thank you Robert 🙂