Cardboard Covers
Woman goes from Cashmere to Cardboard5 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
zeezeewriter,
This is an exceptional write filled with intrigue and tension expressed brilliantly through the use of contrast with a poignant yet heart wrenching ending that hits a home run. Welcome, if you are new to Fanstory. Keep up the great work.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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zeezeewriter,
This is an exceptional write filled with intrigue and tension expressed brilliantly through the use of contrast with a poignant yet heart wrenching ending that hits a home run. Welcome, if you are new to Fanstory. Keep up the great work.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the very generous review. I came back to Fanstory after taking some time off. Nice place to write. Nice meeting you, Eugene.
Comment from Bill Schott
This story has a great finish, employing her ex's words in the ironic twist of his execution. That ending, though, seemed like it leaped over a little more plot development to bring a longer story to a quick conclusion.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This story has a great finish, employing her ex's words in the ironic twist of his execution. That ending, though, seemed like it leaped over a little more plot development to bring a longer story to a quick conclusion.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wrote it for a flash prompt on another site. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Earl Corp
As they say in the funny papers, that was pretty dark. This should have been a flash fiction contest entry. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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As they say in the funny papers, that was pretty dark. This should have been a flash fiction contest entry. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thanks for reading and the kind review. Zee
Comment from Ulla
I shouldn't, really laugh should I? Hehe. This is really quite serious, isn't it? But a sweet revenge always come wit a twist doesn't it? No pun intended of cause!!
What a wonderful thought out story. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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I shouldn't, really laugh should I? Hehe. This is really quite serious, isn't it? But a sweet revenge always come wit a twist doesn't it? No pun intended of cause!!
What a wonderful thought out story. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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You can giggle if you choose. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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I chose to see a desperate situation in a tragic comic light.
It's unfortunately a very real situation for far too many women. I do know.
I'm sorry if I offended you. That was never my intention.
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Gee, I?m sorry I gave you the impression I was offended. Not in the least. The wicked ending is worth rejoicing.
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👍👍
Comment from Annmuma
WOW! The imagery alone will haunt me for a while. The story is vivid, the accompanying picture offer further illustration and the writing is well done. I enjoyed the read. ann
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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WOW! The imagery alone will haunt me for a while. The story is vivid, the accompanying picture offer further illustration and the writing is well done. I enjoyed the read. ann
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the review. I appreciate your kind words.
