Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Pretty good attempt at a humorous poem. Obviously written by a woman. You should try the same prompt written from the man's point of view. Was this a contest?

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Yes it was.

Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

What a great poem for a laughter poem. God knows I've felt this way many times over the years especially while my children were growing up. Your poem reminddd me of a movie I saw many years ago "Diary of a Mad Housewife".
Kudos and thanks for sharing. Great write!!!!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022

Thanks!

Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Exceptional

I can see you panting. As you talk, you tickle me to laugh with ease. Writing as a means of deliberately predisposing laughter is an art, and you succeeded in doing so with a show of innocence.

Congratulations for your well etched out rhymes, which I perceive you did with ease. More so; for your effective use of onomatopoeia, alliteration. Your best stimulant of laughter, to me, was when you said: your glasses were on the top of your head.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022

Thanks!

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 27-Jan-2022

Remain Blessed.

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022

😊

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 27-Jan-2022

Remain Blessed.

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022

You already said that.