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Back In Time For Breakfast

A story from the battlefield in World War One. (400 words)

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Comment from Melodie Michelle
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I give you a virtual six stars because I'm out of sixes to give out right now;-( Exceptional piece my friend! The characters bounced off one another with precision and perfectness!
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you!

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 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
    Thanks for the praise Melodie! I saw the other entry in the contest and it was so horridly bloodthirsty I wanted to write something a bit gentler, even if it is still in wartime.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 27-Jan-2022
    ;-)