Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Great post for the contest. Great writing, you weave together an original take-off of Stars Wars, humor, entertainment, and satire. I loved the ending, NOT AGAIN. History has a way of repeating itself. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Thanks for the great review Theodore! Glad you enjoyed it! Not sure if the series will end here or not, as same-sex couples are now banned, so maybe I'll have to give one of them an operation.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I can see we have a continued sequel in our mist. I can't wait. I enjoyed reading this family saga writing prompt entry. You definitely keep me on my toes as I am sure you do others. Thank you.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Thank you! I am finally catching up on my late responses. I don't have any new episodes planned yet, but then again, none of these were written with any sort of preceding plan, since I never know what the new contest rules will be. LOL. I am pretty sure though (spoiler alert!) that I will be writing a prequel in one of the upcoming contests that I am hosting later this month : )

reply by barbara.wilkey on 01-Feb-2022

I can't wait for the sequel.

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent prose my friend! This story idea was an awesome idea;-) The storyline is exciting and interesting and held my attention throughout the piece!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you;-)

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Thank you very much Melodie! This piece caps the Star Wars series . . . for now! (I think you saw the other three, which are linked in the author notes). I took a break for moving and am finally getting caught up on my late responses. Star Wars has so much material, it's a great storyline to adapt, and a lot of fun.

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Written with energy and love of the Starwars brand. I would be a better reader of this if I had that much experience with the franchise. I'm sure there was significance to every activity including Luke cutting off his own hand and jumping off the cliff with Leia, not to mention their last second reprieve. There was cohesiveness to the storyline ... and you did manage to domesticate, if only for a moment, the dark force. For that it was a job well done. Your writing ability was never under doubt!

Jay

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022

Thank you Jay. I hope you get a chance to see the originals! In the event you do, I don't want to give the story away. This is the final (for now) installment in my four-part series, written to push the rule of these family writing contests right to the limits. Each time I enter, more rules get added for next time. It keeps me entertained!

reply by Jay Squires on 04-Feb-2022

I've given up trying to figure out how to win contests here. One needs to study Lee (Humpwhistle) with a microscope to do that.