Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

yes, that picture does look peaceful and serene

only suggestion i could make is instead of "reflected" try "reflects in"? just a thought!

nice work! thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022

Thank you, Shelley, for your feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both :) Best wishes, Debra

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Ah, and that picture is such an example of that "picture-perfect peace." It's that bridge in Germany, I think. Great lanturne form and perfect choice of picture to go with the poem! Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022

Thank you so much, Helen, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I've always like the lanturne poem Debra. The shape should be obvious to those that write it. And I takes, like all short form poems, something special, and yours is. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022

Thank you so much, Roy :) I appreciate both your feedback and good luck wishes, kind regards, Debra

reply by royowen on 26-Jan-2022

Most welcome