Tranquility
Lanturne Poem13 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
great tranquil imagery that expresses the serenity of the photo. In fact a very powerful photo for your poem. Makes you want to join in the paddling. good luck in the contest, i really liked this one.
lulube
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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great tranquil imagery that expresses the serenity of the photo. In fact a very powerful photo for your poem. Makes you want to join in the paddling. good luck in the contest, i really liked this one.
lulube
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Hi Lulu :)
Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Along with those sparkly stars!! An extra big thank you :) Best wishes, Debra x
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and a big welcome back!!
lulube
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Lanturne Poetry writing prompt contest. I love the lanturne poetic form. You followed the rules well. I love the presentation and imagery.
I love the idea of taking a moment to reflect.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the Lanturne Poetry writing prompt contest. I love the lanturne poetic form. You followed the rules well. I love the presentation and imagery.
I love the idea of taking a moment to reflect.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Gypsy :)
I appreciate your lovely feedback and good luck wishes!
Kind regards, Debra x
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is well written. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is well written. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Raul :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Both picture and words are perfect here Debra, magical and peaceful. A fine Lanturne poem bringing ambient light all readers, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Both picture and words are perfect here Debra, magical and peaceful. A fine Lanturne poem bringing ambient light all readers, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Hello Dolly :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from LisaMay
Virtual 6
What a picture-perfect photograph - and your poem is the perfect accompaniment (or is it the other way round?) Love the alliteration. This is a superb presentation - it made me want to be that kayaker.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Virtual 6
What a picture-perfect photograph - and your poem is the perfect accompaniment (or is it the other way round?) Love the alliteration. This is a superb presentation - it made me want to be that kayaker.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, LisaMay :) I really appreciate your lovely feedback and that virtual 6!
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Gloria ....
And this does indeed look like a lit lantern. The A at the apex is an inspired choice.
And such great wisdom in these few words. A reflected moment.
Excellent artwork to complement this.
Wishing you great luck with the voters with this gem. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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And this does indeed look like a lit lantern. The A at the apex is an inspired choice.
And such great wisdom in these few words. A reflected moment.
Excellent artwork to complement this.
Wishing you great luck with the voters with this gem. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Gloria :)
I appreciate your lovely feedback and good luck wishes also.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the artwork, Debra,
and thanks for sharing about it.
-A good presentation and topic.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery describing
the moment, and a good ending with 'peace'.
-One thing to think about; hyphenated words
might be counted as one word. You might want
to take it out to make sure of the syllable count.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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-I love the artwork, Debra,
and thanks for sharing about it.
-A good presentation and topic.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery describing
the moment, and a good ending with 'peace'.
-One thing to think about; hyphenated words
might be counted as one word. You might want
to take it out to make sure of the syllable count.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Best wishes, Debra :)
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You are welcome, Debra. Love the profile pic!!
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a lovely poem to read. I also love the picture. It is the perfect setting for the peace and tranquility you write about. Good luck in the contest. Have a great evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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What a lovely poem to read. I also love the picture. It is the perfect setting for the peace and tranquility you write about. Good luck in the contest. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind feedback and good luck wishes, Shirley :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Bill Schott
This lanturne, Tranquility, has the proper formatting and, along with the amazing image, reminds the readers that there are times and places that we can still find that peaceful pause. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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This lanturne, Tranquility, has the proper formatting and, along with the amazing image, reminds the readers that there are times and places that we can still find that peaceful pause. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Bill, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Thatguypk
Good God, what a wonderful photograph, and so perfectly enhanced by your well-selected words. I'm not really into the shorter poetic styles, but when they are as attractive as this, they certainly catch the eye. Very well done.
PK
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Good God, what a wonderful photograph, and so perfectly enhanced by your well-selected words. I'm not really into the shorter poetic styles, but when they are as attractive as this, they certainly catch the eye. Very well done.
PK
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Hello Peter :) Thank you for your kind feedback. I appreciate it!
Best wishes, Debra
