What Would You Do?
For the Savior3 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
This poem is beautiful, great rhyming, and flows smoothly. It asks some very probing questions. Although Jesus doesn't stand at my door in person every day, He dwells in my home. I talk to Him in prayer, read His Word, and thank Him for all the blessings He has bestowed upon me.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
This poem is beautiful, great rhyming, and flows smoothly. It asks some very probing questions. Although Jesus doesn't stand at my door in person every day, He dwells in my home. I talk to Him in prayer, read His Word, and thank Him for all the blessings He has bestowed upon me.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Unnamed Poet a Wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your Rhyming contest entry. The rhymes were good and flowed well and the poem was thought provoking. Good job and Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
Hello Unnamed Poet a Wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your Rhyming contest entry. The rhymes were good and flowed well and the poem was thought provoking. Good job and Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I think you might need to work on your piece a bit more once you recheck the rules for the competition. It needs to be a rhyming poem with a certain scheme which this doesn't meet.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
Hi there,
I think you might need to work on your piece a bit more once you recheck the rules for the competition. It needs to be a rhyming poem with a certain scheme which this doesn't meet.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
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