My Apartment
It is small, but that's okay.3 total reviews
Comment from NmaHassan Muhammad
Whoever has God, has everything. There's so much faith, love and contentment in this poem. I love the rhyme and most especially, the spiritual tone. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Whoever has God, has everything. There's so much faith, love and contentment in this poem. I love the rhyme and most especially, the spiritual tone. Nicely done!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thanks..
Comment from zanya
What a lovely poetic tribute to one's home/apartment - a sense of safety and peace and love is depicted - and also a sense of connection with God 'we can pray to God above'
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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What a lovely poetic tribute to one's home/apartment - a sense of safety and peace and love is depicted - and also a sense of connection with God 'we can pray to God above'
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear writer,
I enjoyed your poem very much. It had a nice rhyme scheme and flowed very well. It did have one typo "It is is a special place to be." You put is
twice. Even that didn't concern me much. It was the contest entry requirements that concerned me. It said no picture but you had artwork. It said to describe your home or apartment. I suppose you did that because my walls in some rooms are the same as yours. I just don't know if it is enough. It is a great poem though and it does have a nice flow. You will have to judge it yourself. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Dear writer,
I enjoyed your poem very much. It had a nice rhyme scheme and flowed very well. It did have one typo "It is is a special place to be." You put is
twice. Even that didn't concern me much. It was the contest entry requirements that concerned me. It said no picture but you had artwork. It said to describe your home or apartment. I suppose you did that because my walls in some rooms are the same as yours. I just don't know if it is enough. It is a great poem though and it does have a nice flow. You will have to judge it yourself. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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It is better than good!
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I am just telling you what I saw before it goes into review. I didn't say it was bad. I actually said I liked it until I read the rules.
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You said it was great
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Yes, and I think it is. I think you need to fix the typo. And check the rules again about the picture. I don't want you discounted from the contest because of a picture. I sure do not mean any harm by my comments. I just want the best for you in the contest.
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I did fix the typo. The photo is the contest's entry, not mine. You put good.
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I put great. And I am glad to hear that the picture is from the contest.
I do wish you the very best in the contest. Yours is the first poem I have seen for this contest and I have an inkling I will be voting for yours. Best wishes. Have a good night.
Darlene
Dear writer,
I enjoyed your poem very much. It had a nice rhyme scheme and flowed very well. It did have one typo "It is is a special place to be." You put is
twice. Even that didn't concern me much. It was the contest entry requirements that concerned me. It said no picture but you had artwork. It said to describe your home or apartment. I suppose you did that because my walls in some rooms are the same as yours. I just don't know if it is enough. It is a great poem though and it does have a nice flow. You will have to judge it yourself. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
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😊 On the review you put good
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I am not arguing all night with you over good or great. That is certainly not the way to entice someone to vote for your poem. I gave you my review end of story. Have a good night.
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😊
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Blessings, Darlene