Live Love
A nonet contest entry.7 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
It's hard to do a Nonet, hard to get a good triangle shape - and definitely hard to put in rhymes as well, even if there is no pattern - so well done. Best wishes for your fine entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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It's hard to do a Nonet, hard to get a good triangle shape - and definitely hard to put in rhymes as well, even if there is no pattern - so well done. Best wishes for your fine entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Wendy. I'm so glad you liked my poem. I agree that nonets are harder than they look! (I've posted another nonet called "Life (With Nonet)" if you'd like to take a look.
Comment from LisaMay
I like the symmetry of your presentation and how you have integrated the nonet amidst the attractive illustration you have chosen. I also enjoyed the sentiment expressed. In addition, the random rhyme appearances also make your poem appealing.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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I like the symmetry of your presentation and how you have integrated the nonet amidst the attractive illustration you have chosen. I also enjoyed the sentiment expressed. In addition, the random rhyme appearances also make your poem appealing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the review and stars, Lisa. So glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry. I really like its presentation, The image is perfect with your words embedded in it. The touches of rhyme add interest to an already great theme that well expressed with your thoughts and feelings. Great job with the syllable count per line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry. I really like its presentation, The image is perfect with your words embedded in it. The touches of rhyme add interest to an already great theme that well expressed with your thoughts and feelings. Great job with the syllable count per line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Jan, for reading, commenting, and rating. And I especially appreciate the spelling hint!
Comment from mermaids
There is a musical feel and flow to your words. I like the image of the two doves awhirl, it adds to the feel of your words. Excellent poetic form and a feel for love comes through clearly.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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There is a musical feel and flow to your words. I like the image of the two doves awhirl, it adds to the feel of your words. Excellent poetic form and a feel for love comes through clearly.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this review and for your rating, mermaids. I'm glad you found clarity in this swirling little flight of fancy.
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Although this is a simple poem it speaks volumes. It reminds me of old souls and true soulmates. It flows nicely and reads well. Thank you for sharing your perspective of love.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Although this is a simple poem it speaks volumes. It reminds me of old souls and true soulmates. It flows nicely and reads well. Thank you for sharing your perspective of love.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reading this little ditty, Heather, and for the stars. Definitely old souls! We were married 45 years.
Comment from Thatguypk
Very nice, and very romantic, and as we approach Valentines, very appropriate. I'll have to have a go at a nonet, they seem like fun to write. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read.
PK
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Very nice, and very romantic, and as we approach Valentines, very appropriate. I'll have to have a go at a nonet, they seem like fun to write. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read.
PK
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. (Is it pk?) Oh, and for the stars, too! They are fun to write. I think they're a little tricky because they tend to sound choppy if you're not careful. But give one a go--you never know.
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I will. And it's Peter. :-)
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Ah, good. Thank you, Peter.
Comment from Susan Newell
You've done a great job combining the graphics with the poem. It's a simple message, but has been true since the days of Adam and Eve, and you've presented it very poetically. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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You've done a great job combining the graphics with the poem. It's a simple message, but has been true since the days of Adam and Eve, and you've presented it very poetically. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Susan. Graphics is not my strong suit, if I even have a strong suit! I made a slight edit because I wasn't happy with beat, so I quickened it with beating. Thanks so much for the pretty stars.
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You are most welcome.
